I'm Looking for a Trapdoor Trigger

[natsunonamae]

Title: I’m Looking for a Trapdoor Trigger
Rating: R
Characters/Pairings: Ohno/Jun
Word count: 2166
Summary: Ohno has no idea how acting in ‘Maou’ would personally affect him. Jun is shaken.
Warnings/Notes: Inspired by Ohno's interview. Maou was powerful and Ohno’s acting was resplendent to a terrifying point in it; there had to be a trade-off somewhere

Comments

[natsunonamae]

Just, thank you. Thanks for your thoughtful feedback and for reading this piece ♥

[boblemon]

Aw, that was such a wonderful story. I really loved how you conveyed the emotion, Ohno getting so sucked into his role and Jun obviously know enough about Ohno to figure out that he wasn't acting right. I especially loved the scene when Jun pushed him away in the closet... I sort of felt like it was Naruse trying to get out and take advantage of the situation or something. >_>;

And then the end was so great, Jun realizing that Ohno was back and Ohno letting himself completely go with Jun. Their relationship was so deep in this even though there wasn't much actual writing on that, just their reactions to one another.

Thanks for this! :)

[natsunonamae]

Yeah, Ohno was kind of channeling Naruse there, during the closet scene. It's uncharacteristic, but I wanted to portray, hmm, Ohno's desperation, perhaps? But I'm ecstatic that you picked up on that.

Thank you for your feedback, as always. ♥ :)

[sesquerdo]

OMG! This was beautiful! The way you expressed their feelings, the suffering from both of them… really beautiful! But the most beautiful thing is the way they understood each other and were able to go through Maou dark era… Thanks a lot for sharing! ^.^ An angst, yet beautiful Juntoshi! ^.^

[natsunonamae]

I'm glad you liked my Juntoshi! I was a little nervous about it, tbh. Thank you for reading! ♥

[nekochan_lia]

omg... i'm almost at lost of words reading this.
the feelings of jun and ohno truly conveyed through the words
it was heart breakingly beautiful, with a perfect ending.
i could imagine this happened when ohno finish filming maou
thanks so much for writing this.
your juntoshi is beautiful

[natsunonamae]

OH WOW. WHAT CAN I SAY TO A COMMENT AS STUNNING AS THAT?

Maybe, just, thank you. Really, thank you. You have no idea how happy it makes me to know that my Juntoshi is appreciated. ♥

[mylittlecthulhu]

OMG. You wrote a Juntoshi, and it's beautiful, in an achy, yet unbearably sweet, way. I love the way you wrote both of them, the way Ohno changed - I always wanted to read a fic about Ohno during Maou - and the way Jun reacts to it, and... oh, I don't know. I'm feeling kind of incoherent right now, I love this so much.

(also a part of me is crying because I wish I could've written something like this ♥)

[natsunonamae]

NO, MARI, NOOOOOO. No one can write better Juntoshi than you, trust me. ♥

...but yes. I am more than glad to know that you appreciated mine. So glad. :)