Law of Inertia

Nov 14, 2011 05:54

Title: Law of Inertia
Rating: PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Aiba/Jun
Word count: 3793
Summary: Aiba and Jun, in the span of many years. Aiba wonders if Jun will ever understand.
Warnings/Notes: This is Aiba’s POV; you can find Jun’s POV in Law of Gravity. I suggest reading that first so this part won’t seem too horribly jumpy. It’s been sitting unpolished ( Read more... )

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bubbalooee9 November 13 2011, 22:55:03 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥

As expected this was as beautiful as the first part *swoons*

It's made me smile and feel all warm and fuzzy, thank you :D

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natsunonamae March 18 2012, 07:42:55 UTC
I suck for replying so late, but I want you to know that I appreciated your comment! Thanks for reading ♥

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bubbalooee9 March 18 2012, 07:55:42 UTC
Aww you're welcome :) ♥

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ginger001 November 13 2011, 23:26:42 UTC
This is so beautiful, that really it made me feel warm inside... they are so very cute!!! I read Jun's version first. A bit angsty but read together with this one, it makes the whole thing, just perfect!

Oh, please, I hope you decide to write more Jun/Aiba! But, you know, don't forget sakumoto, pretty please! ^^

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natsunonamae March 18 2012, 07:43:51 UTC
ANOTHER LATE REPLY. But thanks love, for always reading the stuff I write. It means the world! ♥

You know I won't forget about the Sakumoto, ahaha ;)

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thoroughlynerdy November 13 2011, 23:28:11 UTC
Please allow me to confess my undying love to you. I re-read Law of Gravity and it is just as heartbreaking as I remembered, but still completely beautiful ( ... )

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natsunonamae March 18 2012, 07:46:26 UTC
/stunned by your comment

I know, I'm horrible at replying on time. But please know that I read the comments and really appreciate them and take them to heart.

I FEEL LIKE JUN WILL ALWAYS STAND BEHIND AIBA, NO MATTER WHAT

Thanks for reading, really. ♥ :)

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afrit_marid November 14 2011, 02:32:56 UTC
lovely! junba officially owns me. ♥♥♥

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natsunonamae March 18 2012, 07:47:39 UTC
There's just something about them together, yes? ♥ Thanks for reading!

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r_1_ss_a November 14 2011, 03:19:53 UTC
I thought I had friended this journal already but not until I got the email that you commented on the first part that made me realize that I hadn't. Got that remedied quickly! :)

But that's not the point! I want to gush, GUSH SO MUCH, because AIBA! <3 I don't know how anyone can NOT love aiba! I want an Aiba!

I love the way you wrote this one (and the first part, but you already knew that!) because with the first part, you had it in serious!Jun mode. While this had the bouncy!Aiba tone, if that makes sense? The way you wrote both parts suited the POVs they were written for and that's awesome on it's own.

I love the moments you picked. It's like looking at their history and expanding it and telling us what happened. The way they saw it. That it had been there all along but Aiba was scared of loving too much because he can't let Jun down, he can't let Arashi down. AWWWWWWW AIBA.

WHY DOES NINO GET THE MOST AWESOME LINES EVER? I adore GAME-CHANGER And Ohno, so insightful. I love the "butt-touching is just that"! So many good lines ( ... )

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natsunonamae March 18 2012, 07:48:56 UTC
/is on a compulsive replying to comments streak

I WANT AN AIBA TOO

I love the moments you picked. It's like looking at their history and expanding it and telling us what happened. The way they saw it. That it had been there all along but Aiba was scared of loving too much because he can't let Jun down, he can't let Arashi down.
OH YOU

Thanks for reading and commenting, as alwayssssss :)

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