Spectrum

Jun 05, 2013 01:28

Title: Spectrum
Rating: G to PG-13
Characters/Pairings: Arashi/Arashi
Word count: 2380
Summary: What if an Arashi member loves a fellow member and they don’t return the favor? Because they love another member? And it turns out to be a circle of unrequited love?
Warnings/Notes: Just a little experiment and a masochistic writing exercise of sorts; ( Read more... )

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mellastella June 4 2013, 18:50:05 UTC
Ohno ↔ Sho and Aiba → Nino → Jun → Sho, right? Dang, no love for Aiba-chan! I thought maybe each member had an unrequited crush on another member, but that doesn't seem to be the case, huh?

Damn, this was depressing, but so tragically beautiful. I love that each style sounds like their voices.

There needs to be more Arashi!angst like this more often. When it's done right, like this, I can't help but want more. ♥

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murrponchan June 5 2013, 12:43:26 UTC
Hm? No, it was Ohno to Aiba! This line here: I still think about pressing my lips on the map on your shoulder.

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mellastella June 5 2013, 15:15:35 UTC
If you look below, you can see my comment about Ohno's crush. I originally thought it was Aiba-chan, too, but because of the shoulder comment. But then the round eyes description threw me off. And then I thought maybe shoulder = sloping shoulder = Sho? So I dunno. Maybe she'll verify it, or maybe my original guess was correct.

Regardless, it's kinda fun guessing who's crushing on who!

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natsunonamae June 5 2013, 15:47:04 UTC
It totally wasn't my intention to make you guys guess who was crushing on who, but hey, if it's fun!

(But lemme just say, as far as I'm concerned, Aiba has the roundest eyes ever. ♥)

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mellastella June 5 2013, 16:15:38 UTC
Oh my God, his eyes are so precious, srsly. ♥

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natsunonamae June 5 2013, 15:44:45 UTC
Map. Aiba. But whatever floats your boat works too! It's fiction for a reason ♥

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natsunonamae June 5 2013, 15:43:56 UTC
That's comes as a relief to me, that you find that each style sounds like their voices. I tried to keep that in mind while writing!

Thank you so much for your kind feedback, as always. ♥

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