To Hang on Humming Wire (2/2)

[natsunonamae]

Title: To Hang On Humming Wire
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Jun/Ayase Haruka, with a side dish of Sho/Fukiishi Kazue, Nino/Naka Riisa, Aiba/Kitagawa Keiko, and Ohno/Yanagihara Kanako
Word count: 14,693
Summary: AU. Jun and Haruka come from two different worlds.

Part 1

Comments

[tormipoisid]

Wow! It's like the first (Arashi) het-fic that I really love! I adore Jun-kun here. It's kind of how I see him in real, too. If he was just rich (not an idol from Johnnys), he would probably be just like this Jun. It still feels like he is holding back so much, not letting anyone see his real self...

Anyway... Loved all the pairings. And the story and all, completely. It's nice how you used the outlines of Austen's story but made it yours. And big compliments for making it different (not just throwing other names in the book, if you get what I mean).

"Home" --- that killed me :) Perfect ending!

[natsunonamae]

That's such a big, big honor, seeing as that there are a couple of het-fic authors that I really, really admire. Thank you so much. I'm touched that you liked how I wrote Jun. (He's my favorite to write. Shh.)

Again, thank you for all your kind comments! ♥

[tormipoisid]

I can't think of any het-stories that I truly like.. Feel like recommending some? :)

Your welcome! I suck at commenting but I do try to let writers know what I think about the story.

[natsunonamae]

Super late reply, but I've always meant to share my finds to you! Off the top of my head:

Like Vines We Intertwined - This was a relatively recent Sho/Jun/Keiko that a really liked! It's just beautiful, if a little unorthodox. It's written so well!

Layers - I'm not sure if you've seen Kagiheya but if you're a fan, this is a must read: it's Aoto/Enamoto and it's just so wonderfully written and such a treat to read. The author also has several other het fics that are a must-read!

Enjoy. ♥

[tormipoisid]

Oh, thank you! Just finished reading the first one and it was so great! I'm sure I will enjoy the second one, too.

Thank you once again! (PS: I really should start giving het-fics a chance - I saw the Sho/Jun/Keiko one posted but since it was het-fic with Sakumoto, which I don't care that much, I didn't even read first paragraph. Silly me!)