Feb 03, 2009 20:20
Ok so these are the plots I am sending to my tutor. I got the ideas from Bee and Amber so much thanks you two. However if my tutor leave it up to me I wont be able to choose so please choose the one which is better or the one i could write more on! Any other comments are welcome!
Act 1
Scene 1
Grace is pregnant; she’s confused what to do so she confides in her best friend Sara. Sara convinces Grace to tell the father of the baby, Timothy. However it does not go how Grace hopes, Timothy does not feel ready to be a Father.
Scene 2
Timothy has a close relationship with his mother; he begins to ask his mother about babies. His mother becomes suspicious and asks him whether or not he is using protection when having sex. When Timothy says no his mother becomes worried and Timothy spills all.
Scene 3
Timothy’s Mother gets into contact with Grace’s Mother. They discuss the future of the unborn child, they talk options. Both of the children’s parents feel like neither of the children are ready for the responsibility and decide an abortion is what’s best however Grace is not sure she wants to kill her child. It ends with Grace about to say what she wants to do but stops before she gets round to it.
OR
Act 1
Scene 1
Grace is at a party with her boyfriend, she has recently started wearing baggy clothes and no one realises why. They all start drinking including Grace but when she starts to get pains in her stomach she tries to leave however her friends don’t want to go yet. Grace’s water breaks and realises she having her baby.
Scene 2
Grace and her friends turn up at the hospital but are all still in shock especially Grace’s boyfriend, Timothy, who did not know she was pregnant. He sits and waits impatiently. Their parent turn up, they shout at Timothy for being stupid and wait to hear the news.
Scene 3
Grace’s parents and Timothy’s parents are all surrounding Grace and the baby, talking about the stupidity of unsafe sex and what to do with the baby. Timothy realises this is stressing Grace out tells them to get out with the help of a midwife. Timothy and Grace talk about their future.