Alphabet (U, V)

[narya86]

Title: Alphabet (U, V)
Parts: A | B | C | D | E | F | G | H | I | J | K | L | M | N | O | P | Q | R | S | T | W | X | Y | Z
Pairing: Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres, (Cesc Fàbregas/Nicklas Bendtner)
Rating: NC-17, PG
Disclaimer: It sucks always having to come up with new ways to say how much they don't belong to me.
Summary: Part of the Alphabet

Comments

[acrayonsmile]

Um. The first one made my brain melt. SO sexy. And funny.

“Wow. Okay. I’m fine, I’m good.” After another second of looking at each other though, he suddenly blushed. “Stop, don’t look at me, this is awkward.”

“What? Where the hell else am I supposed to look?!”

“I don’t know! Do I look like I have any clue? Move or something!” I laughed so suddenly I made my dog jump.

The second one made me miss them all. How happy <3

[narya86]

Oh God, the icon. I miss them too, I really do. *sigh*

Good to know I made you laugh though. :D I really had fun with them as teenagers, and nice to know that it was hot too. ^^

[tetila]

The first one.... just ♥ Has a special place in my heart because it's perfect and cute and funny and fluffy and so them, as teenagers

The second one plays in a lake... huh imagine that :P

Err yeah no, I love it. It's so normal and light hearted you can only smile after reading that :)

[narya86]

:D I have to admit the first one is kind of special for me too. At least it was kind of very heart-warming and fun to write all the way through.

Lake, right. Funny coincidence. :D

[littlesumo]

You kinda got a running commentary already, so a proper comment will follow tomorrow. :)

One of my favourite parts though
I don’t know how to do this.

I don’t want to hurt you.

Will we be alright?

Are you really sure?

I didn’t even know…

[narya86]

Yay. :D I'm looking forward to it.

Dan really really cared about Fernando even without the sex already, so... :)

[reneeexplosion]

The first one was just...amazing. I truly love how you described the friendship between them in the beginning and that little scene where Fernando is looking at the pictures and Daniel is leaning with his head on his shoulder just really hit me for a reason, it just spoke of such an amazing friendship. I was a bit scared though that it would get awkward at the end but you managed to make it all less awkward and make them act like just friends and even more and the last few sentences were just lovely.

And the second one was just fun and happy and it really makes me long for the summer again!

[narya86]

Oh thank you so much! I'm glad you took note of the little moment with them looking at the pictures, I imagined they had this amazingly close friendship even before the story began. And phew, no awkwardness at the end. :D I struggled with that a little so, yay!

[elf_md]

I was drawn in by Nicklas, ready to fawn over him like crazy.

But fuck, that first one. That might possibly be the best ever fairytale first time I've read. The laughter, the banter, the sense of of my fucking god, that's my best friend and I don't know what I'm doing.

And most of all, your love for these boys shines through and that's heartwarming as ever.

[narya86]

You don't know how much you make me smile with your comment, so thank you so so much. ♥ I wanted the first one to be somewhere between fairytale perfect and helpless and panicked at the same time because, yeah, it's bound to be awkward, especially since they're so important to each other already.

And... I'm sorry that there wasn't more Nick? ^^

That last sentence - just, thank you. :)