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[Fanfiction] The Ratio of Freckles To Stars

Aug 14, 2006 10:32

Title: The Ratio of Freckles To Stars
Genre: Romance/General
Pairing: Hanabi/Tenten
Rating: R

For: forever3330
Requested pairings: Sakura/Hinata, Hanabi/Tenten, Hanabi/Ino
Up to three things you want: Anything's fine.
Up to three things you don't want: Um. I'm good. Just no kinky sex, please.
Preferred ratings: I'd prefer no smut. :D;

( Hanabi is not a child )

r, fic, hanabi/tenten

Comments 8

yira_heerai August 14 2006, 04:45:26 UTC

....I am going to quote something I said to a friend while reading this:

With that, she presses her mouth against Tenten’s, hard, and swallows the other girl’s surprised gasp right off her tongue. Tenten’s lips are cold, but her palate is hot and wet against Hahabi’s darting tongue that flickers wildly in a promise to do the same to the rest of her body.

It lasts only for a moment. Then Tenten abruptly breaks the kiss and tries to push her off. Hanabi holds her ground.

“Hanabi, I…”

“You don’t need men,” Hanabi intones firmly, shoving her thigh between Tenten’s own.
YiraHeerai (10.29.13 pm): .......*fans self* I love Mai
YiraHeerai (10.29.39 pm): I would easily let myself have a fling with that Vietnamese writing queen

In short: FUCKING BRILLIANT. Oh..my...god. It may not have been easy but you pulled it off fantastically.

Holy shit...

Holy shit.

*adores you*

ronsard August 14 2006, 05:27:31 UTC

YES. YES, YOU KNOW YOU LOVE ME.

My yuri brings all the girls to the yard, babe :3

yira_heerai August 14 2006, 05:44:22 UTC

For a wet t-shirt contest? :D *tail wag*

hashire August 14 2006, 16:03:27 UTC

Definitely not a pairing I've ever heard of, or would generally think of reading, but this was amazing. I loved it.

ronsard August 15 2006, 01:56:21 UTC

Well wouldn't you know it :)

It's not in my nature to be cracky, but I do so love a challenge. Thanks for commenting.

flowed August 15 2006, 04:34:34 UTC

I lovelovelove it. e_e LOVE IT. And the title~ And it's so pretty~ And I love you~

I know that made little sense, but I'm speechless, and all I can say is THANK YOU and I'm going to memory this and spam my friends. e_e

ronsard August 15 2006, 07:41:55 UTC

You do? Yay, my work is finished here ^^

The title is from a Halou song. It's very pretty, and totally the inspiration for this piece *_*

flowed August 17 2006, 03:52:25 UTC

I really do!

Oh, I'll have to look up the song~