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Nov 16, 2006 14:52
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starstruck2
November 16 2006, 21:00:46 UTC
omg. I love this. <3
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riza
November 17 2006, 04:18:14 UTC
Absolutely gorgeous. You've got the characters down perfectly, and your Jiraiya is a sexy old bastard. (In the best possible way.)
their scars (those that had never healed and those they refused to let heal) softened
A haunting line, and a great use of imagery.
(Ah. So she had merely been pretending. Manipulative, crafty, sexy bitch.)
Couldn't help but giggle over that line. Lovely. Again.
Excellent. I applaud you.
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lykomancer
November 17 2006, 04:35:44 UTC
Oooooh, pretty~!
Very, sweetly, precisely drawn. Lovely.
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immelmanturn
November 17 2006, 06:11:18 UTC
Beautifully done. I love the ee cummmings, so many props for that.
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infi_inficio
November 17 2006, 07:10:49 UTC
Ah. That was very pretty. :D
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their scars (those that had never healed and those they refused to let heal) softened
A haunting line, and a great use of imagery.
(Ah. So she had merely been pretending. Manipulative, crafty, sexy bitch.)
Couldn't help but giggle over that line. Lovely. Again.
Excellent. I applaud you.
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Very, sweetly, precisely drawn. Lovely.
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