Part 2

[narugami]

Completed part 2. Again, watch out for end-of-game spoilers! No dandruff jokes this time, but I did manage to work in a few snarky comments about beans. 'Emoretta' as a translation for 'Nekaretta' is purely raikochan's invention... I hope you don't mind that I borrowed it. -_- This one's also rather grimmer than the previous one, but the concluding part wil

Comments

[narugami]

I wrote those lines (where Anise gets angry) in a seething fury. It was kind of scary actually. ^^; I don't know, I just remembered being younger and being miserable at school, and powerless to change anything because I was technically a kid. Also a lot of this is coming from being smarter than all my classmates and wondering if they were really that airheaded or just pretending to be. Oh dear.

Also Anise has every reason to be angry, but there's fear and grief and guilt mixed in, too. More character development to follow XD;

I don't know who is taller... does it matter? She should probably be taller because she's older, but if Florian's naturally tall...? I really don't know.

Er, Axel and Roxas, probably? Or am I jumping to conclusions? I don't mind writing you a story after I finish the game (I have to know all the rules of the setting before I start playing around with them.) Just, uh, I don't think I can do slash --;

Also, KH is a licensed property so I would feel bad if the word 'commission' came into it. It would just be a free-will present between friends but if you freely make me a picture in return or something I wouldn't mind *shot*

[maiki]

Heh, personally I'm hoping Florian is still taller. :D

I can't tell you yet. :3 I know you won't write slash, anyway, so don't worry about it. XD Sure, I can freely make an artwork for you anytime!