Fic: Eulogy

Sep 08, 2009 20:04

Title: Eulogy
Author: turkeyish
Recipient: caramelsilver
Rating: G
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: None
Summary: "My brothers," Susan says quietly at the funeral, "were always two bodies, one soul."

Eulogy )

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caramelsilver September 8 2009, 19:19:23 UTC
qweiojkjhfasjkhiuowieow!!! I LOVE THIS SO FREAKIN MUCH! IT'S EVERYTHING I HOPED FOR AND MORE!!! *deep breath* *collects myself*

Okay. This is absolutely fantastic. I love how they are just brothers. They don't need to explain anything to each other, because the other one understands!

My favorite part is this: In Calormen, they whisper that the slim, dark-haired king is made of shadows and silence, that he hides blades on his person like street performers hide coins with nimble fingers, that he uses words the same way that an archer savours each arrow. So so nice! I just completely love it. And the KNIVES! since I apparently have a thing for knives, so any mention of hidden knives just makes me squee!!

And the fight! Edmund's all like 'I don't need help, I can handle it myself' and Peter's all like 'yeah I know that, but you don't have to.' Oh, Pevensie boys, how I love you!

And yeah! Edmund can't eat his lawbook! They should just learn right away that Edmund the Just likes sweets! Give him some, or he'll steal his brother's!

I love the all the contrasts, how people think they're so different and they're all like, Um... NO.

*Hugs fic* Just!! GAH, I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! *goes to re-read*

You did a brilliant job with the prompt. It's so so great! (If you can't already tell with all my flailing.)

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turkeyish September 9 2009, 19:33:16 UTC
OMG I AM SO, SO, SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. :D thank you so much for your extremely flattering flailing! it was a joy to write for you, bb.

BY THE WAY, you are the most amazing, most understanding, most patient mod EVER, and thank you so much for enduring my deadline issues. :P

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