Bribes for Concrit!

[naotalba]

I am always looking to improve my writing. I need help for that.

So, announcing the return of bribes for concrit. You post one piece of constructive criticism for a drabble, a paragraph or more for a longer story, your choice of pairing and prompt.

Anon commenting is always enabled, and ip logging is always off in my journal. You can post as a comment to the story you are critiquing, or here if you prefer.

I'm happy for any help I can get.