Comment with a story I've written, and I will tell you one thing I knew, learned, or wondered about while writing the story that didn't make it onto the page.
Wow, I hadn't reread that one in a long time, and it's hard even for me.
Elizabeth is so conflicted here because she doesn't know who to be jealous of. She wishes she had just gone for it with Jack, since Will hadn't been faithful either, but she very much doesn't want to be pregnant herself, and she thinks that that would have been the outcome. It makes her act badly, but that's just because she's human, and under an incredible amount of stress- she's also the captain of the ship in this AU.
It's interesting to imagine her and Will getting back together and having their own children (maybe - or not) after this. I'd hope Jack would remain on their minds for a while. A long while.
Man, it's harder when there's already a commentary track, but here goes.
David, Patrick's ex-boyfriend, actually came on tour with them for a week or two without Pete picking up on the relationship.
Pete knows how to interpret Sleepy!Patrick's 'go make coffee' hand gesture, but he knows if he does it just once, he'll be stuck with no excuse not to forever, and watching Patrick flail is adorable.
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Elizabeth is so conflicted here because she doesn't know who to be jealous of. She wishes she had just gone for it with Jack, since Will hadn't been faithful either, but she very much doesn't want to be pregnant herself, and she thinks that that would have been the outcome. It makes her act badly, but that's just because she's human, and under an incredible amount of stress- she's also the captain of the ship in this AU.
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Thanks for revisiting this for me.
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ETA: Totally stealing this meme. *STEALS SHAMELESSLY*
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David, Patrick's ex-boyfriend, actually came on tour with them for a week or two without Pete picking up on the relationship.
Pete knows how to interpret Sleepy!Patrick's 'go make coffee' hand gesture, but he knows if he does it just once, he'll be stuck with no excuse not to forever, and watching Patrick flail is adorable.
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