Fic: "Homesick Flesh" [NC-17, Dean/Cas - for help_nz]

Apr 07, 2011 01:29

TITLE: “Homesick Flesh”
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season 6, nc-17, dean/castiel, fic, charity auction, spn

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nanoochka April 7 2011, 19:19:12 UTC
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I have a weird fascination with writing S6 fic, despite the fact that a lot of other people seem too frustrated with the current D/C dynamic to really enjoy it. I think it's just my overactive saviour complex that wants to fix everything through writing. I have no idea where Show will take them but I hope it's better than what we have now. :/

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talli_approved April 7 2011, 06:14:35 UTC
*sigh* I love your characterization, your unique understanding and interpretation of Dean and Cas.

Beautifully done.

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talli_approved April 7 2011, 06:15:59 UTC
Oh and also? I heart this line so much. It's sweet and dirty and kind of unexpected from Cas, but at the same time totally like something he'd say.

“I gave you this mouth, of course it could never love anything so much.”

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nanoochka April 7 2011, 19:20:47 UTC
Hehe, that line made me fret a little because I both loved it and wondered if people would find it a bit too arrogant for Cas. But he is arrogant, and I love the idea of him just pwning Dean in every way, even like this. :P

Really glad you liked it, though! I'm glad I was able to come up with a prompt response I didn't totally despise, because the first attempt was not so great. XD

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mulder200 April 7 2011, 06:50:02 UTC
“So you can fuck off sooner?” Dean laughs again. “I’m trying.” Breath puffing against Castiel’s ear, Dean hears his own throat click in a swallow; he licks his lips, lets the angel feel the brush of his mouth against the side of his face, the quick flicker of tongue. “What is it about him, huh?” he murmurs. “You used to come to me, Cas, remember? Weren’t so self-righteous when I was on my knees for you, making you moan-I can still hear how you used to say my name, like you were praying for my mouth. And now…” Dean shrugs sadly and nuzzles a kiss into the soft skin behind Castiel’s ear. “Now it’s like I don’t hold a candle to this smarmy bastard who isn’t good enough to lick your goddamn shoe. So tell me-” his tongue curls against the peachfuzz flesh of Cas’s earlobe, “-what’s he got that I wasn’t giving you?”

Poor Dean. I think not only is he jealous but he's also hurt by the fact that Cas no longer holds him in the same regard he once did. And the fact that Castiel chooses to confide in Balthazar over him? Yeah, that must sting!

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nanoochka April 7 2011, 19:21:57 UTC
I don't think Dean and Cas will ever be enemies, but you're right - their current relationship is extremely foggy and upsetting. I'm just doing my best to reset the balance through fic. :P

Thanks for reading!

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adja999 April 7 2011, 07:10:49 UTC
*babbles incoherently*

Oh wow. I wish something like that happened in the show. The canon version of it. You know? Dean calling Cas over and saying, "so... that's it? We used to be friends and now we're back to you fucking ringing mt bell when you need something?".

This version is much much hotter. Maybe someday we'll get to have it. ^^
In the meantime, I know I can trust you to give me sweet dreams.

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nanoochka April 7 2011, 19:27:50 UTC
I also wish this would happen; Dean and Cas's ability to call each other on their respective shit has always been one of my favourite things about their relationship, and Show has sorely neglected this aspect. There's a lot of self-involvement that is kind of unlike them, because they always had reasons to be self-involved before but still managed to make their friendship work. So I don't even know.

In the meantime I'm sending waves of ESP to the writers so they'll pick up on our need for some wallsex between these two. I think it'll make everything better.

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adja999 April 7 2011, 20:03:27 UTC
Wall sex? Kind of like... five minutes after my icon?

Oh, if they give us THAT, they'd be forgiven for EVERYTHING.

For killing Bella off so quickly. For killing Crowley. And Gabe.

For Anna. In freaking general.

Which, point of interest, was supposed to be Castiel. Did you know that? Originally, Anna was supposed to have Castiel's storyline and vice versa. She was supposed to be Dean's guide and shit, become her angel and of course... be his honey.
Which makes me think... it can only mean one thing: it'll happen with Cas. Hey, for once, this is true: it was written. :P

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reticentric April 7 2011, 21:29:25 UTC
Totally don't mean to interject here but, really? So everything that Cas did was originally Anna, yet we got it all with Cas except the intimate stuff? -_-

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aliassmith April 7 2011, 07:22:28 UTC
This is a great bookmark to the lack of Dean/Cas interaction in s6. Definitely something we all need right now.

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nanoochka April 7 2011, 19:28:33 UTC
I agree, which is probably why I'm constantly compelled to write something to get me through this godforsaken OTP-less season. :(

I'm glad you liked, it though!

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