Jazz Club Romance (pgs. 1-4)

[jtabon]

Hey all!
First time posting here, so if I'm stepping out, feel free to smack me back in line. ;)

First off, just letting you all know I'm doing NanoMango to complete my entry for TokyoPop's Rising Stars of Manga contest, so I won't be able to post my finished story here. BUT, it's been intimated that if it were to be posted behind an f-lock, it

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[starchildorion]

Wow, the style is just really funky-fresh and I like it a whole lot! *_*

Will you eventually be adding the wording? What's happening on page 4 is kinda confusing. XD

[jtabon]

Well I'd be screwed if I tried sending it in without text, huh? ;)

Yeah, but that's usually the last thing I do. The only text I do by hand are sound fx and the occasional insane exclamation.
Then again, I don't think page 4 would be any less confusing with dialogue, lol.
Thanks!

[starchildorion]

Oh, well I figured that you'd be adding it in, I was just wondering if you were keeping it out because of the contest, or if it was something we'd eventually be looking at!

[jtabon]

Oh.
Well, I'm still not sure, in all honesty. A lot people seem to think that if you post anything at all, you're disqualified. Others say put up a few pages, but nothing with spoilers.
I'm halfway between the second view there and f*** all that, so I'll probably end up f-locking most if not all the pages, just without text.

Shouldn't be so confusing as this last page here, I think. This was the text-heaviest page in the story, I'm pretty sure. And none of it's really exposition, just cheap jokes. =/
So yeah, shouldn't be TOO hard to follow. I hope. lol

[starchildorion]

Okay! XD Gotcha!