See, here's a mystery. ("I love a mystery.") How did Angel know? And Quor'toth! We know only so much about it, but what sticks with me from canon is Connor's anguished cry, "You let him take me!" I'm so interested in how you plan on using the kidnapping of the baby, entwining it into Ethan's exile.
I would never have thought of having Giles like this about Ethan---I know that Ethan has his adorers! Don't hurt me! But I love how you're writing Giles' desperation and implacibility. You've always written him as just, but fair, with a glimmering of humor under the seriousness of all his dealings with Spike. Now, of course, his humor has disappeared, and rightly so. I love stricken, haunted Giles! I hope Ethan treats him better by the end..
You conveyed the essence of the otherworld very well in Spike's and Dawn's inner meeting. You say you had trouble writing it---it doesn't show. I continue to be fascinated, and completely sold on, the complicated love that Spike and Dawn share. And words, unfortunately, don't sufficiently portray how much I believe in your Spike/Buffy. I believe every single line of their conversations as if I was hearing them from my DVD player. The sex is, of course, the hotness.
Mike and Dawn! I liked Dawn's reaction to Mike's reasonableness. I like how he's more than Angelus, mark 2. But how he is like his original sire and his true sire, in that he wants his lover to appreciate him and appreciate the efforts he makes for her!
Oh, I anticipate with joyful rubbing of hands Mike's reaction to Spike interrupting his phone call, much less Spike taking Dawn to the hell dimension!
I would never have thought of having Giles like this about Ethan---I know that Ethan has his adorers! Don't hurt me! But I love how you're writing Giles' desperation and implacibility. You've always written him as just, but fair, with a glimmering of humor under the seriousness of all his dealings with Spike. Now, of course, his humor has disappeared, and rightly so. I love stricken, haunted Giles! I hope Ethan treats him better by the end..
You conveyed the essence of the otherworld very well in Spike's and Dawn's inner meeting. You say you had trouble writing it---it doesn't show. I continue to be fascinated, and completely sold on, the complicated love that Spike and Dawn share. And words, unfortunately, don't sufficiently portray how much I believe in your Spike/Buffy. I believe every single line of their conversations as if I was hearing them from my DVD player. The sex is, of course, the hotness.
Mike and Dawn! I liked Dawn's reaction to Mike's reasonableness. I like how he's more than Angelus, mark 2. But how he is like his original sire and his true sire, in that he wants his lover to appreciate him and appreciate the efforts he makes for her!
Oh, I anticipate with joyful rubbing of hands Mike's reaction to Spike interrupting his phone call, much less Spike taking Dawn to the hell dimension!
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