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nancybrown

War Games (2/4)

Oct 13, 2011 17:00

Title: War Games (2/4)
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mcparrot October 14 2011, 11:20:18 UTC

"Well, I've been around enough to wonder if it predicts your disease or gives one to you."

This was brilliant.

Jack's run in with Trent adds an extra dimension to the story and I'm wondering if the mysterious Weasel will turn up somewhere. Francine of course must know him.

Francine being there is quite inspired.
And sneaky Lois is still giving me the willies.

nancybrown October 14 2011, 13:45:06 UTC

Martha's screwing with him. It's fun. ;)

The Trent subplot is what moved this from "brain candy" to "story," so I am pleased you liked it.

fide_et_spe October 14 2011, 22:03:21 UTC

I'm getting quite nervous with this story, and I may have to hold my breath soon.

I keep thinking that Jack is smart and will have sussed this conspiracy, but we know he's been fooled before.

I'm just sending you an email..

nancybrown October 14 2011, 23:50:10 UTC

I got the email, and thank you! *makes adjustment*