Random Shard: Defend yourself, my lady. I will not be gentle.

Jun 20, 2006 01:58

Defend yourself, my lady. I will not be gentle.

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I wonder if it would work better with a semicolon. I know I could use a comma if I said "for I will not be gentle" but I wasn't going for that sound.

Rambling over a single line. It's no wonder I hardly complete anything. ^^

By the by, many thanks to swollenfoot for the birthday gift - a subscription to Writer's Market! *glomps* One step at a time, ne?

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