Title: A Flower for Every Ferrygirl
31 Days Theme: March 20th/Eyes which are Really Petals
Series: YYH
Character: Koenma/Ayame/Botan
Rating: G
Notes: This written just for the
31_days theme. Word count: 264.
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She is breathless from all the twists and turns... )
Drabbles really are something. I find when I try to write anything short it's either too cryptic or too long. Sometimes both^^;;
I also agree...that ending is awesome. It just...has a certain feel to it, that leaves the drabble in a good why. It's conclusive without really definitely concluding anything. I love it.
I recently stumbled upon your story 'Riven'. What are the odds of seeing that updated? The snippets I've read are very intriguing...I'd love to know the whole story. Not trying to be a nuiscence, though...Heaven knows, ninety percent of the stories in MY head never even see light of day. But anyway, I really like the way you write, and the way you get inside Koenma's head, to the point where you don't even bother to think about what form he's in...Toddler or teenager, he's the same Prince of Reikai, ne?
...I'm rambling now. I love what I've read. I really hope you pick up Riven again sometime :)
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Ohhh, I have that same tendency with writing too. Well, the long part. For some reason, things just groooow. Practice makes you better, though. If all else fails, just pretend you're writing a summary of the story and cut off the intro and the ending. That's what I like about the whole concept - jump into the scene and then jump out before you get bored. ^^ My attention span, it is short...
Speaking of which, that's one of the reasons why I haven't written Riven all these years. For some reason, if I try to do something past a one shot, I lose steam and sort of... stop. So chances of Riven being written in full are, well, kind of slim. I write random snippets, if that helps. (I know it doesn't, but yeah, XD) I really do appreciate your interest, though.
And yeah, Koenma is who he is, no matter what he appears to be. *huggles Koenma*
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