<3 I like number one the best but it was nice to see Kyouya you knwo in diffrent situations even though I'm not a Kyouya/Haruhi shipper KYOUYATAMAKI FTW ...ahem...I like your writing ^^
I'm glad that you liked it... despite the fact that you're not a shipper.
I have to admit that I'm not really a Kyouya/Haruhi shipper because I'm willing to bet money that she's going to end up with Tamaki... but I really like the idea of Kyouya pining for Haruhi (so far, in none of my fics has he really ended up with the girl).
Wow. Very different Kyouyas than what I'm used to seeing in fics. The first one threw me a little, seeing Kyouya say "tits" was kind of odd, but it worked. I liked all 3, really. The last one, however, made me a little sad for both of them. :( Poor Kyouya and Yumi!
On "tits": I had a debated on that. I didn't think "breasts" worked either. Neither did "boobs". I think he'd be a little crasser since he's been banging a prostitute. O.o
Success! You're supposed to feel sad for them. Esp. Yumi.
#2 was supposed to be angrier... but I couldn't write it angry. I dunno why.
Wow, I can honestly say I've never read anything like this before. I really enjoyed it. It was kind of hard seeing Kyouya go after a prostitute, but given the circumstances I guess it's plausible. When I was reading #2 though, I thought Leiko was engaged to Kyouya o.o..so I was confused when I got to #3. But I liked all of them. One last thing I thought was missing was Haruhi's whereabouts NOW. But that just emphasized her and Kyouya's distance so I'm not too bothered by it.
Aww! I admit, I was thrown at #1. But it still worked...I am a Tamaki/Haruhi shipper, but this was still a sweet fic. I kinda agree with you, on that you like the idea of Kyouya pining for Haruhi. I think I like that too ^^;
You've done it again! :0 Please feed your muses more music for they are pleasing to my good!fic deprived soul. I love each of the females...the second one is probably my favorite...that whole thing just had an air of tragedy around it and you know for certain that it won't go well.
"There is no love in our world," indeed. Kyouya is no Tamaki who is going to throw the world away for love and such...he is incredibly concious of societal roles and difficulties and such.
But, while the complete avoidance of Haruhi in anything but a verbal sense is very much like Kyouya (the one line you had about him strengthening the fortifications around his heart...perfect), I am incredibly curious to know what happened to Haruhi.
Greedy wench!namistai8January 4 2007, 05:04:22 UTC
Mmm. I'm glad you picked #2. I think it would have been interesting to see how Kyouya would have handled being married to a really worthy woman which he can't love because he's horribly in love with Haruhi.
I do feel for Yumi because she likes girls and has to get a boy... because that's the way THEIR world runs.
I don't know if anything happened in particular with Haruhi. I think in the back of my mind, she probably married Tamaki. I don't think she was dead. In the third scenario, I did play with having Kyouya introduce Yumi to Haruhi... but that was much more cruel than I can handle.
Go forth with my blessing and write Kyouya ;)
My next fic will probably be Kaoru-centric. I don't know if you like him, but that's what it's going to be. I still have a Tamaki/Haruhi fic for you that is half done. And stubbornly remains half-done. I can't get it to move. I need some happy spastic in English song about letting go and just falling in love... you have anything in that department (or are we just cynical wenches?)?
You know, there's something awesome about opening my inbox and having recieved a message entitled "Greedy wench!" ^-^
I have a thing for characters who get screwed by their social realities. And, I can't really imagine Kyouya giving up said social reality for a girl...even if it is Haruhi.
Well, Yumi could always have extra-marital affairs, probably with Kyouya's blessing...but oh dear, that would be quite a scandal if found out. And, poor Kyouya, to have to introduce the two...really Haruhi would have no clue, and Yumi - if she is anything like Tamaki - would just be horribly depressed by the fact that the man refuses to help himself.
I actually owe someone Kyouya...I just have to think about what to write for him...Yuzuru totally ate the bunny that I did have
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I have to admit that I'm not really a Kyouya/Haruhi shipper because I'm willing to bet money that she's going to end up with Tamaki... but I really like the idea of Kyouya pining for Haruhi (so far, in none of my fics has he really ended up with the girl).
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Success! You're supposed to feel sad for them. Esp. Yumi.
#2 was supposed to be angrier... but I couldn't write it angry. I dunno why.
I'm glad I got to surprise you!
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D: hearts for you.
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#1 seems a bit implausible... but Kyouya doesn't strike me as someone being above resorting to seeing a prostitute.
I deliberately chose to make Haruhi be absent because I had no idea where she is in all these scenarios.
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Thank you!
And we're evil because we like Kyouya pining for Haruhi... (most of my fics have the male character pining for the female one anyway)
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"There is no love in our world," indeed. Kyouya is no Tamaki who is going to throw the world away for love and such...he is incredibly concious of societal roles and difficulties and such.
But, while the complete avoidance of Haruhi in anything but a verbal sense is very much like Kyouya (the one line you had about him strengthening the fortifications around his heart...perfect), I am incredibly curious to know what happened to Haruhi.
Now I wanna write Kyouya!
But these are love! <3
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I do feel for Yumi because she likes girls and has to get a boy... because that's the way THEIR world runs.
I don't know if anything happened in particular with Haruhi. I think in the back of my mind, she probably married Tamaki. I don't think she was dead. In the third scenario, I did play with having Kyouya introduce Yumi to Haruhi... but that was much more cruel than I can handle.
Go forth with my blessing and write Kyouya ;)
My next fic will probably be Kaoru-centric. I don't know if you like him, but that's what it's going to be. I still have a Tamaki/Haruhi fic for you that is half done. And stubbornly remains half-done. I can't get it to move. I need some happy spastic in English song about letting go and just falling in love... you have anything in that department (or are we just cynical wenches?)?
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I have a thing for characters who get screwed by their social realities. And, I can't really imagine Kyouya giving up said social reality for a girl...even if it is Haruhi.
Well, Yumi could always have extra-marital affairs, probably with Kyouya's blessing...but oh dear, that would be quite a scandal if found out. And, poor Kyouya, to have to introduce the two...really Haruhi would have no clue, and Yumi - if she is anything like Tamaki - would just be horribly depressed by the fact that the man refuses to help himself.
I actually owe someone Kyouya...I just have to think about what to write for him...Yuzuru totally ate the bunny that I did have ( ... )
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Renge/Hunny? You're a sick, twisted woman. Renge belongs to Nekozawa. They are dork love together.
I'll get back to writing, I feel inspired.
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