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named_by_rhyme

[Deaths] the Morrigan

Apr 05, 2009 18:38

Title: coincidences
'Verse/characters: Deaths; the Morrigan
Notes: This is an expansion of perhaps that was a bad plan and tell me something dangerous and true, sparked in part of coastal_physics requesting something early in the storyline.
Word Count: 2436

( Agathe spent half the morning itchy and out of sorts, sure that there was something wrong, somewhere in the street just out of her sight, no matter how often she turned her head. )

the morrigan, deaths

Comments 12

coastal_physics April 6 2009, 02:04:12 UTC

I like this.

it reads well :)

billradish April 6 2009, 02:16:02 UTC

Very nice. The imagery in this is pleasantly real and vivid.

taennyn June 24 2009, 04:50:39 UTC

I'm still seeing rough spots, but suspect this is where this story opens, which is kind of neat to have, y'know? An edge piece in the jigsaw.

(just noticed the count on this post)

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taennyn April 6 2009, 03:19:10 UTC

And this, this is why you were ALWAYS SCREWED, dude.

*laughs* Yeeeah. The councils would LOVE to have her allied with them, tied down and safe, but they don't try to push her, fight her for preeeety much this reason. You might get lucky, bring her down. But that would be the only way. =\

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taennyn April 8 2009, 19:53:36 UTC

*dead!* Exactly. :D

darthneko April 6 2009, 10:30:01 UTC

oooooh. I remember the very first part of this, but all put together and expanded... oooooh. I like it. Muchly.

taennyn April 8 2009, 19:54:51 UTC

I still feel it's missing pieces, but yeah, it's starting to come together. :)

klgaffney April 7 2009, 01:27:19 UTC

[is now posting from Other computer before i break something valuable. like my computer.]

this? is a great read. and it's all solid and detailed and it works perfectly as purely text....and it still makes my fingers itch. also, despite the frightening, there is still rawr. *headdesk* this is Wrong.

taennyn April 7 2009, 01:30:27 UTC

I'm starting to suspect this thing is a steampunk graphic novel in disguise. *eyes it*

:D She's a lot of fun to write.