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[Wild Roses] Some Kind of Love Song

Feb 12, 2009 14:25

Title: a gentle sort of intimacy
'Verse/characters: Some Kind of Love Song; Arianhrod, Takashi
Prompt: 03A "the space between"
Word Count: 732
Notes: follows from Come, we'll go dancing--, which, while a great spot for a rest, ain't the end. :D

( I woke to someone planting delicate kisses along my side, atop each of my ribs, from the floating up to the ones beneath my armpit. )

arianhrod, some kind of love song, list a, takashi, wild roses

Comments 9

illian February 12 2009, 22:47:21 UTC

From what little I've seen of Lehseet, she probably has more reasons to hang around then tails and none of them obvious.

But it will be such a wonderfully bad idea!

taennyn February 13 2009, 07:02:10 UTC

she probably has more reasons to hang around then tails and none of them obvious.

. . I gotta admit I really like the way you can pick things out. :)

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taennyn February 13 2009, 07:02:54 UTC

First with her persists in feeling oddly intimate; I kept nearly-slipping into present tense with this.

billradish February 12 2009, 23:36:15 UTC

*prrs* I'm also quite fond of Arianhrod in first.

klgaffney February 12 2009, 23:40:33 UTC

I'd apparently tossed his shirt well more than halfway across the room and onto a standing brazier that had fortunately not been lit at the time.

and a good thing that is! not that they couldn't handle it if that weren't the case, but it might have been distracting. *solemn*

the rest is lovely. the hair, especially. it's all sorta shivery. i like that she's still thinking "yep. probably a really bad idea, and wtf am i doing?" and still doing it anyway.

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taennyn February 12 2009, 23:46:53 UTC

He keeps making her smile. It's very disconcerting.