[Deaths] the Morrigan

Oct 21, 2008 11:56

Title: breaking fast
'Verse/characters: Death be not Proud; the Morrigan, the First of China
Prompt: 14A "waking up"
Word Count: 643
Notes: Argh, I feel like I'm infodumping.
Timing wise, after old soldiers and before blood in the water.

Sniping in the kitchen )

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darthneko October 21 2008, 20:59:48 UTC
TEA! ...or, y'know, concentrated acid that might possibly be radioactive if you compressed it enough. Ahem. ^____^

And also, iiiinteresting. Exposition, maybe, but fascinating.

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coastal_physics October 21 2008, 23:21:16 UTC
Doesn't read like a dump? reads well enough. I continue to love it.

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taennyn October 10 2009, 01:23:02 UTC
Dunno--as you say, it could go either way.

Yes; this is the first piece he ever appeared in, so it's info-dumpy. In revision/expansion phase things are going to move around considerably, I think.

Even so, one imagines what she's doing would make him =|. >.>

The plural. :)

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taennyn October 10 2009, 01:30:12 UTC
It's just barely possible that he wouldn't have a good enough grip on terms of respect that she'd be able to get away with it, which is the direction I was coming from, as opposed to major escalation. As Eduard asked her not to pick that fight. *hands* I need to write more of him, really, and get an idea of how he interacts with the others; his involvement is fairly sketchy and background at the moment.

*waggles hand* she's speaking in present tense, and in plural, which is why she attaches such significance to it; he might well either not care or not notice, but she does?

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