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nakeisha

Fiction. Don't Deny Me

Apr 05, 2012 14:43

TITLE: Don't Deny Me
AUTHOR: Nikki Harrington
FANDOM: Raffles: The Amateur Cracksman
PAIRING: A. J. Raffles/Harry 'Bunny' Manders
GENRE: Slash
SUB-GENRE: First Time
SUMMARY: An afternoon on the river leads to other things.
RATING: R
WORD COUNT: 1,986
DISCLAIMER: I don't own these characters, nor am I making any money from them. I merely borrow them ( Read more... )

fanfic: stories, fandom: raffles, pairing (slash): raffles/bunny

Comments 25

sharpiesgal April 5 2012, 15:38:34 UTC

Lovely.

nakeisha April 5 2012, 15:53:25 UTC

Thank you very much.

vince_moon April 5 2012, 16:24:49 UTC

This is great story.

nakeisha April 5 2012, 16:35:47 UTC

Thank you so much.

I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

delvinan April 5 2012, 17:23:24 UTC

What a strange coincidence - ages ago I had a very similar image in my head of the two of them on the river and it leading to ...other things! Now I don't have to write it! Thank you for sharing this delightful moment of Bunny and Raffles togetherness. Bunny's interior monologue is very believable (bless!).

nakeisha April 6 2012, 11:32:26 UTC

That is a coincidence! It's always fun to hear about them.

Thank you very much indeed - I'm really pleased to hear you enjoyed this and found Bunny's internal monologue so believable.

Thank you.

kendermouse April 5 2012, 17:36:36 UTC

okay... let's try leaving the comment again! :: sigh ( ... )

nakeisha April 6 2012, 11:37:33 UTC

I hate it when LJ eats comments - thank you for persevering!

And thank you for your wonderful comment. I'm so chuffed by how much you enjoyed this story all the way through.

I'm glad you liked Bunny waxing poetical about his Raffles, he does indeed do it so often in the books. Hmm, it probably doesn't count as stealing if it's freely given - and I suspect he stole it all those years ago at school *g*

I'm pleased to hear Bunny's innocence came over so well and indeed calm, cool A.J. losing it like that *g* it's good to know you found it so telling.

Loving Bunny is far more important than a silly game of cricket - even if he does manage to do both. Bunny really is his lucky charm - I do so agree.

Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment.

constant_muse April 5 2012, 20:34:47 UTC

That's lovely - thank you! The beginning, on the river, is very nicely evoked - it's a perfect setting for them, and then I love the way you return to the cricketing imagery.

nakeisha April 6 2012, 11:38:27 UTC

Thank you very much indeed.

I'm really pleased to hear you enjoyed the story, found the setting on the river so good and like the return to the cricket.