Comments | nakeisha: Alphabet Meme. DiNozzo/Palmer (NCIS)

nakeisha

Alphabet Meme. DiNozzo/Palmer (NCIS)

Feb 20, 2012 15:24

TITLE: Eye Opener
AUTHOR: Ashleigh Anpilova
FANDOM: NCIS
PAIRING: Anthony DiNozzo/Jimmy Palmer
GENRE: Slash
SUB-GENRE: Established Relationship
SUMMARY: Tony and Jimmy have been seeing one another for some time. Tony had always believed it had just been for fun until something happens to make him reevaluate his feelings.
RATING: PG-13
WORD COUNT: 1 ( Read more... )

pairing (slash): dinozzo/palmer, fanfic: stories, fandom: ncis

Comments 18

sharpiesgal February 20 2012, 15:42:29 UTC

So this is the story that Six has been torturing you with?

Very well done.

nakeisha February 20 2012, 17:07:11 UTC

It certainly is! *Eyes innocent looking bunny*

Thank you, my dear.

shogunsquirrel February 20 2012, 15:50:00 UTC

You'd better continue this to a happy ending or... or... I don't know what. I'll pout! Yeah! Pout!!!

nakeisha February 20 2012, 17:09:38 UTC

*Watches you pout*

I'm evil - no actually, I'm not. My plot bunny is very evil (when he's not being super sweet that is).

Thank you for reading.

And I do hope to write a sequel to it when I've finished the stories I have to write for people.

Sorry *Slinks away*

sexycazzy February 20 2012, 18:47:05 UTC

I really hope you will write a sequel...pretty please? :-)

Will leave a proper comment/review below...

nakeisha February 21 2012, 15:06:44 UTC

Once I've written the rest of the stories for the Alphabet meme and Six is feeling less angsty I shall aim to do that thing.

shibela February 20 2012, 17:01:12 UTC

Love this! Great job showing the progression of Tony's thoughts. Thank you for sharing! :)

nakeisha February 20 2012, 17:10:22 UTC

Thank you very much.

I'm really glad you thought I did a good job showing the progression of Tony's thoughts.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

joelthecat February 20 2012, 17:48:00 UTC

You have not just the characters, but the whole ambiance of NCIS dead on. "Unacceptable." It's just a truly beautiful story. Well done.

nakeisha February 20 2012, 17:52:05 UTC

That really is a huge compliment, thank you very much indeed.

I'm really chuffed by your comments.

Thank you.

sexycazzy February 20 2012, 18:50:19 UTC

hee hee when I gave you the prompt, this is not what I expected but this is even better than what I imagined in my mind!

I loved how that Tony viewed his relationship with Jimmy as a fun one, 'friends with benefits' perhaps but then when Jimmy got shot, he was hit with all these feelings and then realised that these feelings were more serious than he thought!

I loved having an insight into Tony's thought process here.

I really hope that Jimmy will wake up to hear these words coming out from Tony!

Fantastic, as always!

(p.s. and like I said up there, please write a sequel! Pretty please?? :-D)

nakeisha February 21 2012, 15:09:16 UTC

*Peeks out from behind the sofa*

I didn't think it would be :-( Oh, really? Oh, that is really good to know though - thank you.

I'm really glad it worked for you and you did like how to begin with Tony saw it as just fun (yes, friends with benefits sums it up very well) but then saw the truth of it.

Thank you - I'm really pleased Tony's thought process worked so well.

Thank you, my dear.

I shall do my best once the rest of the stories are written.

I'm glad that despite it not being what you expected that it worked so well for you.