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nakannalee

Fic: Diorama, Jeff/Annie

Nov 19, 2010 20:59

Fic: Diorama
Author: Nakanna Lee
Characters: Jeff/Annie (spoilers for 2.09), largely mentioned ensemble
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Of the show I own nothing but love everything.
Word Count: 2,300
Summary: Under the blankets with Jeff, Annie flashes back to her summer badminton class.

( The sheets smelled of linen and chicken fingers )

community, fic, jeff/annie

Comments 36

mostlyscrubbed November 20 2010, 02:28:06 UTC

Loved this, and have always loved your style.

This is how you shall write more House fic: Replace All instances of "Cuddy" with "Wilson."

nakannalee November 20 2010, 02:34:57 UTC

Haha, so true. Although I'm so angry with "House" right now the thought of writing it makes the stomach queasy. Sadness. We all need to go back and wallow in S2, when things were not only slashy but the evasive well-written.

Thanks for reading this, glad you enjoyed!

mostlyscrubbed November 20 2010, 03:20:16 UTC

I watched the season premiere and not an episode since. Le sigh. At least you still have other lovely things to write about.

ma_vie_en_paris November 20 2010, 02:41:23 UTC

I liked your story from a character point of view, but the game that Annie is playing, with racquets, birdies, and a net, is badminton, not racquetball, which is played with a hollow rubber ball and no net (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Racquetball).

nakannalee November 20 2010, 02:50:51 UTC

Haha, thanks for that catch. (On a sidenote, I will have to inform my family that we've called this game by the wrong name for YEARS). XD

midnitecruiser November 20 2010, 03:04:51 UTC

I flipped out when I saw you'd written something new for these two. Phenomenal subtext here, as in your other two Community stories. Every sentence is spent making Annie more resonant, more real. This is fanfiction on another level.

Turns out Dean Pelton is a very gifted author, after all!

nakannalee November 20 2010, 15:04:07 UTC

Aww, thank you very much!

You know, I almost went back to this fic and inserted more Dean-esque phrasing... but was afraid that 1) People would stop reading b/c it was SO BAD or 2) The twist at the end would be expected. Oh well. For another time, maybe!

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nakannalee November 20 2010, 15:04:55 UTC

Oh thank you, glad you enjoyed those details. They were fun to drop in!

whitters23 November 20 2010, 03:10:48 UTC

Omg, I love that it was actually the Dean! As Abed would say, 'plot twist'!

nakannalee November 20 2010, 15:05:41 UTC

Haha, yes, absolutely. Glad you enjoyed! (Also, your icon is totally one of my fav screencaps from the whole show.) <3