I think I felt a tug in my heart when Sehun confesses that he likes Krystal and I wanted to wrap Jongin in bubble wrap and just feed him cookies and warm milk. This feels like where rainbows end and still just as beautiful in its own way because they changed as they grew and so did their relationship with each other. How it took them so many mistakes, different people and finally not running away from their troubles to realise that they had it right all along. In saying that I love the idea that it doesn't take them at the young age of 16 of figure out they're meant to be with each other - that you touched a bit on their growth and with growth, awkwardness that transcends age. Like when they share their first kiss and Soojung avoids him, or when she's getting married and he avoids her. This is one of those fics that makes you appreciate the people you have in your life and how it's almost to easy to lose them. But it reminded me of one of my favourite quotes "If you love somebody, let them go, for if they return, they were always
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It delights me that you get the message that I try to convey - there are so many things going on and since it's my first time writing something like this I was afraid I'm not able to get the message delivered. Your comment is a spot on of the image I had when I started this and throughout the whole writing process. (I was going to add more scenes and details though but I was scared it'd get too messy)
Thank you for reading and thank you for the wonderful comment. I wish there's a like/favourite button for your comment because it is definitely one of my favourites from you that I will read again and again ♥ Also thank you for bugging me to write something Kaistal because I actually learned a lot from the process, as if I grew up along with the two ~
“I met a new friend today. His name is Sehun.” i love kaistal but i can't with kai/sehun, ok, i can't.
but seriously i really like how they always end up meeting each other and i like how you don't write it cheesily but somehow bittersweet or something like that but it's ok bc they end up together ♥ ok i don't know what i'm talking about i'm sorry. anyways this is wonderful. thanks for writing!
Haha kai/sehun is my exo otp so yeah they're adorable if that's what you mean.
I try to stick to the quote I linked above and also the saying "The first meeting is accidental, second is coincidence, third is fate" thus them keep stumbling upon each other again and again no matter how far they've separated. Don't worry I get your point ^^
Wow, I am absolutely blown away by this piece. Every single line tugged at my heartstrings - how it took them so long - and my eyes almost teared up when they finally got it right ♥ My Kaistal babies are absolutely beautiful, and I just love how you portrayed their relationship with each other...almost intangible (so close to becoming broken, so many times, so many mistakes), but still the sparks were somehow hidden underneath the whole entire time ;_; I especially loved their sweet friendship when they were little...childhood friendships always have a special place in my heart :) This will definitely be one of my favorites to reread! Thank you for writing this ♥
god, this is just lovely. i love the smooth flow, the transitions of their story from childhood to adolescence to adulthood, and the way fate brings everyone together even after they try to put distance between each other.
a. i love jongin's character in this fic. he's so innocent and good and it's like he's an angel lskdghajfk. and i love suzy here. i think she's probably my favorite in this fic because of this: Suji, on the other hand, only smiles and gives him a pat on the shoulder when he tells her. “Thank you for being honest,” she says.
b. Thirty years and thirty thousand people, and finally we got it right. T H I S.
adding this to my favorite fics list because, sobs, it's just beautiful! great job bb! ♥
Yes! Sometimes fate messes up our lives by tearing people apart but sometimes fate brings us back together. When someone is meant for you, you two will eventually find your way back to each other.
Jongin is an angel ♥ He's so sweet and kind and innocent. And I try to keep Suzy the way she is - quirky and lovable and a bit naive.
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Thank you for reading and thank you for the wonderful comment. I wish there's a like/favourite button for your comment because it is definitely one of my favourites from you that I will read again and again ♥ Also thank you for bugging me to write something Kaistal because I actually learned a lot from the process, as if I grew up along with the two ~
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“I met a new friend today. His name is Sehun.” i love kaistal but i can't with kai/sehun, ok, i can't.
but seriously i really like how they always end up meeting each other and i like how you don't write it cheesily but somehow bittersweet or something like that but it's ok bc they end up together ♥ ok i don't know what i'm talking about i'm sorry. anyways this is wonderful. thanks for writing!
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I try to stick to the quote I linked above and also the saying "The first meeting is accidental, second is coincidence, third is fate" thus them keep stumbling upon each other again and again no matter how far they've separated. Don't worry I get your point ^^
Thank you for reading ♥
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how are you so amazing at this?
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haha no I'm far from amazing ~
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a. i love jongin's character in this fic. he's so innocent and good and it's like he's an angel lskdghajfk. and i love suzy here. i think she's probably my favorite in this fic because of this:
Suji, on the other hand, only smiles and gives him a pat on the shoulder when he tells her. “Thank you for being honest,” she says.
b. Thirty years and thirty thousand people, and finally we got it right.
T H I S.
adding this to my favorite fics list because, sobs, it's just beautiful! great job bb! ♥
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Jongin is an angel ♥ He's so sweet and kind and innocent. And I try to keep Suzy the way she is - quirky and lovable and a bit naive.
Thank you very much ♥♥♥
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