Be Mine Chapter 6

Sep 08, 2009 14:03


Title: Be Mine

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be mine, chapter 6, nakachii

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hikarinoniji September 8 2009, 19:29:37 UTC
Yaaaay! Sleep over!
Aw, it was so sweet, and really cute Yuto had somewhat the same reaction with seeing Chinen together with someone else as Chinen has with seeing Yuto and Keito, only Chinen knows his feelings and Yuto doesn't XD I love how oblivious that boy is!
Other than that I wanted to compliment you on the fact that troughout this fic everything has been so realistic... 8D Its really nice reading, because it plays like a movie in my mind ^^

Can't wait for the next chap ^--^

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nakachii September 8 2009, 20:43:08 UTC
I just loved writing this chapter because of how adorably oblivious Yuto is.

I'm so happy to hear that since I'm trying to keep this story as realistic as possible. ^_^ Wow, thanks, it makes me feel happy to hear it!

I'll do my best to get the next chapter up soon.

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arashiaddict246 September 8 2009, 20:20:40 UTC
you just know that something is going to go terribly wrong at that sleep over... i can't wait! XD

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nakachii September 8 2009, 20:43:43 UTC
hmm I wonder XP haha <3

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aida_pi September 9 2009, 02:30:33 UTC
yeah2!! i think so too!!
i hope its not that terrible!! =(

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hotfruits September 8 2009, 21:18:04 UTC
I can't lie, I love Chinen's meaness.
And Yuto, YOU LOVE CHII JUST REALIZE IT!

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nakachii September 9 2009, 18:16:08 UTC
haha I know Chinen is just too cute when he's mean and of course Yuto in denial is <3

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chibilover14 September 8 2009, 22:26:30 UTC
Oh and I forgot to mention. Your YutoChii banner ish so cuuute~! ♥ If only I had some. xP

Uwaaaaaah~!! Chinen giving Yuto a flower~! xDD The way Chinen shows his affection ish too cute. xD

OMFG I LOVED THE TOUCHING HAIR PART. XDD AND THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED YUTO'S THOUGHTS. XDD AND DARN THEY ALMOST KISSED?! ALSKDFJA; SDJFKLA LOL

Haha I sense a dense Yuto. xPP A REALLY dense one. @___@;; Oh my... I think everyone would be irritated at dense Yuto. LOL

AND LMAO THE JUICE BOX PART. LOOOOOOOOL. XDDD AND I LOVE HOW RYUTARO JUST FIGURES IT OUT! XDDDDDDDD

Aww... Yuto ish beginning to feel jealous! How cuuute~ xD And yet he's dense again. xDDD

ASLKDFA ;SJKDLFA;W JKL YAY FOR A SLEEPOVER!!! *FLAILS ALL AROUND* ASLKDJF AWELKJ AND LOL Chinen. xD I love how you depict his character. xDDD

Darn Yuto in denial and Chinen being... embarrassed. >.>;;; LOL

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPY NOW~!!!! ♥♥♥ I love this fic to little pieces. xDDD *envies your writing* xD

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nakachii September 9 2009, 18:21:43 UTC
thanks so much for your comment <3 I love your YutoChii icon too! They are so cute.

I'm so glad you liked it, haha it seems we both love dense Yuto <3, and I'm so happy you liked the juice box part ^_^

I can't wait to write about the sleepover either XD

*blushes* your writing is good too! Thank you *hugs*

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chibilover14 September 10 2009, 03:40:14 UTC
Heehee~! ♥ Thank you~! I love yours, too! xD

Yush we do~! That's why we write him right? LOL

WRITE WRITE WRITE~!! LOL

Nuuu~! *HUGS BACK* Your writing ish way better! xD

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taiga_luise September 9 2009, 00:22:37 UTC
Wuhu!
I waited for this^^
*loves that fic*
I really liked that chapter!
And I'm looking forward to the sleepover xDD
*giggles*
We'll see what comes, ne!?

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nakachii September 9 2009, 18:23:13 UTC
yes definitely we'll see haha
Thanks for your comment *happy*
I'm glad you love the fic *hugs*

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