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naivekiara

Sugar and Spice : Chapter 1

Sep 20, 2016 01:54

Title: Sugar and Spice
Author: yukime
Pairing: Hey Say Jump/ oc
Rating: PG-13
Summary: First (K-pop/J-pop) girl group in Johnny's entertainment had debuted. what will happen if they fall inlove with JUMP members? A lot of Chaos ofcourse!! ^^

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j-pop, k-pop, heysayjump, heysayjump/oc, title:sugarandspice

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brenda000 September 20 2016, 07:20:02 UTC

This chapter has quite some progression.
Yamada gave off such a bad impression in such an early stage, but at least he managed to show a better him.
Wow, Yuto is being really friendly.
Chinen too, so early in the friendship and already pinching cheeks.
Wonder how it will go for them in their future work.

naivekiara September 22 2016, 21:30:41 UTC

First impression are quite friendly ne? I try to make it very interesting for the entertainment lol! I just saw ruri and chinen's picture together and couldn't help but to write about chinen pinching Ruri's cheek lol. I'll be updating chapter 2 soon, mainly about kaori and hans's music video shoot, it's nearly done. Hope you like it ^^

ruci_citra September 22 2016, 19:03:10 UTC

Hikarus's antics to Yamapi is priceless! I love it!!! well, I love all senior-junior interactions tho.
so Yabu fell in love right away. wow. that's fast.
Yamada... I never thought he'd be so daring... (._.)
and Chinen being a bit too friendly... cute.. XD
somehow, I love you for writing Keito-Kaori's relationship as heartwarming as I imagine it would be. I have personal things related to this actually. anyway, thank you. :')

'..Kaori-chan will be having a photo book release..'
and here I was like, "ikinari photo book???" (*A*)

I'll be waiting patiently for the next.

naivekiara September 22 2016, 21:37:02 UTC

I love the relationship of Hikaru and Yamapi together, i saw when hikaru was interviewing Yamapi and reacts really sweetly to him, i couldn't help but to write about it. I made Ryosuke to be quite the player in this story, to add a little spice to it lol! I saw that Ruri-chan have a very pinchable cheek so i just added that in ^^. I really love writing about Keito-Kaori relationship. There's just something about Keito that is very warming about him. I'm so glad that you can relate to it.

I'll be updating chapter 2 soon. Hope you like it ^^