NaNoWriMo

Nov 01, 2007 14:22

So I started my novel a while ago. And it's only the second page and I've already killed someone. I guess that's what happens when you only have extremely vague plot outlines.

These are the first two paragraphs:
“You ignorant slut!” Her voice was shaky and erratic. I knew there were only three women from whom the voice could be coming, but I didn’t turn around to see who it really was. It could have been my sister, who was just teasing; it could have been my stepsister, who wanted to be as close to me as my sister was, but was afraid; or it could have been my ex-girlfriend. This option was the most likely because the closer I analyzed the voice the more hate-filled it seemed.
“You fucking ignorant slut!” Yes. It was definitely my ex-girlfriend. I had recently broken up with her, obviously. “Turn around and talk to me!” I waited to comply until her claw like hands gripped my shoulder with a force that could rip off my arm.

And this is my favorite line so far:

They are the epitome of the radical liberal and I could never live up to their expectations.

EDIT: Make that four people killed in the first six pages. WHAT THE HECK!!!???

hoshitzman, nanowrimo, death

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