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naika7

The Crimson Smile Scene 2

Jan 05, 2009 16:54

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abelard369 January 6 2009, 03:42:54 UTC

Excellent! I love the plot of this story and hope it turns into a series. So cute - Lisbon calling Jane on what he's trying to do, and Jane figuring out that Lisbon won't tell him if things go wrong with the guy she's dating. Can Jane interrupt one of Lisbon's dates by "accident" in some future installation :) ?

naika7 January 6 2009, 03:46:05 UTC

Haha, you are totally inspiring me right now! I am thinking I am will continue :) Thanks for your reviews.

rose_griffes January 6 2009, 04:42:33 UTC

I like Lisbon setting Jane straight. And how he isn't exactly abashed for very long.

naika7 January 13 2009, 04:55:37 UTC

Thanks so much for reading!:)

evidenceshows January 6 2009, 12:45:22 UTC

Hee I loved their conversation about Johnson- it's romantic comedy at it's best. I'd love to read more.

naika7 January 13 2009, 04:56:24 UTC

Romantic comedy :) That's what I am aiming for. Thank you for reading.

red_pepper87 May 9 2009, 21:52:28 UTC

This is really good. I too think you should keep writing.