Re: Any pairing, Miss, Miss me miss me now you gotta kiss mecerealkiller0September 1 2010, 02:13:47 UTC
This is a little...ok...a lot silly. I took the prompt literally. (Don/Ian)
"Haha! Man, That's what you get for being so damned cocky around those new recruits. Come on, Ian. You make a bet like that and somebody is for damn sure gonna call you out."
Ian sighed. He knew everything the other sniping instructor said was true, but at the time he just hadn't been able to resist.
Originally, he made the bet with the new batch of recruits. Anyone who got through the obstacle course without getting hit by the sniper's paintball would get one dare. One shot to humiliate the sniper god. The devilish looks he'd gotten in reply were of no concern. As far as he could tell, pinning all twenty down in the obstacle course would be as easy as hitting the broad side of a barn a couple dozen times. He could do it in his sleep.
But then, that pretty boy tactical instructor just had to materialize at the back of the room. "That offer only open to recruits?"
Ian only had to take one look at the smug challenge on the other man's face to come to a decision. He would use the blue paintballs. Let's see if Eppes could manage that smug look after being turned into a smurf.
"I'll take on any challengers, Agent Eppes." Ian returned, allowing his own ego to seep into the words.
Ian didn't quite know what to make of the brilliant smile that flashed across Don's face as he replied, "I was hoping you'd say that," before making his escape.
Looking back now, Ian could see that it was the same kind of smile a spider might give to a fly - after it landed on it's web, but before it sucks its guts out. Eppes not only managed to evaded Ian throughout the entire course, but had also had the gall to sneak in his own paintball gun.
As a result, Ian was now in the locker room changing out of a decidedly magenta-colored shirt, listening to the snickers of those airheaded recruits as they filtered past, and being ragged on by his own colleague.
Eppes had been stealthy, devious, and if Edgerton were willing to admit it, kind of brilliant.
"Well Ian, looks like it's time to pay the piper." The other instructor commented, gesturing towards the doorway as he made his own exit.
There was Eppes, almost bouncing on the balls of his feet, wearing that same stupid smile.
Anyone else, and Edgerton was sure he'd want to wipe that smile right off their face, but looking at Eppes, he couldn't quite help the answering grin slowly forming own his own face.
"You're a sly bastard, you know?"
"Yep." Eppes affirmed. Why was he bouncing?
"I'm pretty sure you cheated." Ian grumbled, throwing the painted shirt in the bottom of his locker.
"Nope."
Ian just shook his head. "Ridiculous," he mumbled to himself, pulling a clean shirt on over his head.
"Well aren't you going to ask me?"
Ian turned back towards him. "What?"
"My dare."
Ian groaned. Of course Eppes wouldn't have forgotten that part. "Fine, Eppes. What's your omph-"
Before Ian could get the question out, Eppes launched himself forward, claiming his lips in a sloppy kiss. Ian was too shocked to respond at first, but after a moment, well, after several moments, pushed the other man back, breaking the kiss.
He just looked at Eppes for a moment, too shocked to speak, before blurting the first thing that came to mind, "What, are you high?!"
And Eppes just smiled that same stupid smile before turning and walking towards the door, softly chanting, "Miss me, miss me, now you've gotta kiss me!"
Ian touched his lips and stared after the other man. Huh. Maybe I should make bets with Eppes more often.
Re: Any pairing, Miss, Miss me miss me now you gotta kiss mecerealkiller0September 2 2010, 23:28:46 UTC
Thanks for the feedback. This was my first stab at trying to get back to writing after a pretty long break. I'd definitely love to write more for the comm, I just need more prompts to choose from ;)
Re: Any pairing, Miss, Miss me miss me now you gotta kiss met_vo0810September 2 2010, 23:48:14 UTC
You can write for any prompt on any post on the comm. There are tons of ones that are still unfilled but even if they are filled, you can still write for them - there's no rule against more than one commentfic per prompt. The only thing you can't do on previous/closed posts is make new prompts. But if you want to write commentfic or just comment on old prompts or commentfics, you are most definitely encouraged to do so. :D We would love to see more from you! In the meantime, I will see if I can't drum up some more open prompts for you! :D
"Haha! Man, That's what you get for being so damned cocky around those new recruits. Come on, Ian. You make a bet like that and somebody is for damn sure gonna call you out."
Ian sighed. He knew everything the other sniping instructor said was true, but at the time he just hadn't been able to resist.
Originally, he made the bet with the new batch of recruits. Anyone who got through the obstacle course without getting hit by the sniper's paintball would get one dare. One shot to humiliate the sniper god. The devilish looks he'd gotten in reply were of no concern. As far as he could tell, pinning all twenty down in the obstacle course would be as easy as hitting the broad side of a barn a couple dozen times. He could do it in his sleep.
But then, that pretty boy tactical instructor just had to materialize at the back of the room. "That offer only open to recruits?"
Ian only had to take one look at the smug challenge on the other man's face to come to a decision. He would use the blue paintballs. Let's see if Eppes could manage that smug look after being turned into a smurf.
"I'll take on any challengers, Agent Eppes." Ian returned, allowing his own ego to seep into the words.
Ian didn't quite know what to make of the brilliant smile that flashed across Don's face as he replied, "I was hoping you'd say that," before making his escape.
Looking back now, Ian could see that it was the same kind of smile a spider might give to a fly - after it landed on it's web, but before it sucks its guts out. Eppes not only managed to evaded Ian throughout the entire course, but had also had the gall to sneak in his own paintball gun.
As a result, Ian was now in the locker room changing out of a decidedly magenta-colored shirt, listening to the snickers of those airheaded recruits as they filtered past, and being ragged on by his own colleague.
Eppes had been stealthy, devious, and if Edgerton were willing to admit it, kind of brilliant.
"Well Ian, looks like it's time to pay the piper." The other instructor commented, gesturing towards the doorway as he made his own exit.
There was Eppes, almost bouncing on the balls of his feet, wearing that same stupid smile.
Anyone else, and Edgerton was sure he'd want to wipe that smile right off their face, but looking at Eppes, he couldn't quite help the answering grin slowly forming own his own face.
"You're a sly bastard, you know?"
"Yep." Eppes affirmed. Why was he bouncing?
"I'm pretty sure you cheated." Ian grumbled, throwing the painted shirt in the bottom of his locker.
"Nope."
Ian just shook his head. "Ridiculous," he mumbled to himself, pulling a clean shirt on over his head.
"Well aren't you going to ask me?"
Ian turned back towards him. "What?"
"My dare."
Ian groaned. Of course Eppes wouldn't have forgotten that part. "Fine, Eppes. What's your omph-"
Before Ian could get the question out, Eppes launched himself forward, claiming his lips in a sloppy kiss. Ian was too shocked to respond at first, but after a moment, well, after several moments, pushed the other man back, breaking the kiss.
He just looked at Eppes for a moment, too shocked to speak, before blurting the first thing that came to mind, "What, are you high?!"
And Eppes just smiled that same stupid smile before turning and walking towards the door, softly chanting, "Miss me, miss me, now you've gotta kiss me!"
Ian touched his lips and stared after the other man. Huh. Maybe I should make bets with Eppes more often.
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