The Pin Anon-CommentFic Exchange: The Second

[myxstorie]

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THE SECOND
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Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[anonymous]

Yamapi's mother is over the moon when he finally proposes, and when Rina tells them the date over dinner, Yamapi smiles and congratulates them just like he should. While the women are fawning over the ring sparkling on Rina's finger, Jin frowns gently, questioningly across the table at him, and Yamapi hates that he still loves the way Jin can read him like a book. He excuses himself with a nod of apology under the pretence of an early start in the morning, and escapes before Jin can start asking questions.

It's a white, Western-style wedding; of course it is, it's Jin. It's small, private, and their families and close friends are all gathered, waiting.

Yamapi knows this is it. Jin is straightening his jacket in the mirror and running his hands over his hair, slicked back into a tight ponytail while Yamapi watches, watches, can't tear himself away now even if his life depended on it. Then Jin's looking at his reflection, turning to cock his head to one side with that tiny furrow in his brow that Yamapi always wants to smooth out with his thumb, and he can't keep it out of his eyes any more. He can't pretend any more, can't go on wondering what if, needs to know with every fibre of his being.

What is it? Jin's asking, but he knows already, What's wrong?

Yamapi doesn't answer - they've never needed words before - and when he takes that final step, Jin meets him half way, pressing their lips together.

Jin tastes of salt, of desperation, and he kisses back like he's a dying man trying to drink the life from Yamapi's mouth. Yamapi's hands fumble with Jin's hair, fingers tangling and pulling it free, mussing it up because Jin's never been neat and tidy. Jin's face is wet when he pulls away, closing puffy eyes against Yamapi's tiny, pathetic little whimper, and he covers swollen lips and a red nose with shaking hands, drawing in a long, shuddering breath.

I'm sorry, he's saying, turning his back. Yamapi can feel the world crashing down around him and this, this is so much worse than not knowing.

You took too long.

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[lineelu2001]

"I'm sorry, he's saying, turning his back. Yamapi can feel the world crashing down around him and this, this is so much worse than not knowing.

You took too long."

This broke my heart. T-T

Thank you for the commentfic!

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[myxstorie]

I'm sorry~ thank you for reading :D ♥

OP

[tatoeba]

T__________________________________T OMG. OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. A;LSKDNG;ALSDKNG;ALSDKGA;SLDG THIS. IT'S PERFECT. I-I DON'T EVEN HAVE THE WORDS FOR IT. YAMAPI'S LOVE IS SO BITTERSWEET, JIN AND RINA DATING IS JUST CUTE, AND THEN THE ENDING, OMG. THEY KISS AND JIN'S YOU TOOK TOO LONG OH MY GOD. ;ASLKDNG;ALSGDA ;___________________________; SOBBING.

ANON-SAN THANK YOU SO, SO MUCH. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL AND PERFECT AND I LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT. A;SLKDGNALSDG ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Re: OP

[anonymous]

lklkaslkda;slkd THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REQUESTING. I WOKE UP THIS MORNING, SAW YOUR PROMPT, FLAILED, AND SPENT THE NEXT HOUR UNABLE TO GET BACK TO SLEEP BECAUSE I COULDN'T STOP WRITING IT IN MY HEAD XD

This is totally my favourite prompt so far, ilusm for requesting it (and really, I should have known it was someone like you ^_~ *creepy* )

Re: OP

[myxstorie]

I STILL LOVE YOU FOR THIS PROMPT. THANK YOU ♥

Re: OP

[tatoeba]

OMG I HAD A FEELING IT WAS YOU BUT I WASN'T SURE. A;SLKDNGASG VIX THANK YOU. I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT. ;___; IT WAS PERFECT. ♥

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[anonymous]

my heart... give it back ;__;

that was beautiful, thank you!

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[changetje]

kflaskd;laskd;lsa ANON, YOU JUST BROKE MY HEART ;_; That was so beautiful, but at the same time heart-breaking. Especially you took too long/

Thanks for writing, anon-san *_*

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[myxstorie]

alksdjalksd THANK YOU ;_; ♥

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[anonymous]

I loved the prompt to begin with but maaaan, I loved this to tiny little pieces. The ending, their silent exchange and sfjwnbef Jin not saying anything, not needing to say anything, like that bond between them is what breaks Pi's heart, in the end :'< but I loved it in my little masochistic heart, thank you

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[sashjun]

;_;
wait this one
T_T

this was so bitter sweet, I want to hug them both D: it was great!

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[myxstorie]

♥ thank you~

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[sashjun]

should have known this was you <3333

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[tinyangl]

Oh. oh. this made me so so sad. even though I ship Jin/Rina like nobody's business, the whole thing was so bittersweet that I just wanted everyone to be happy somehow. D: It was beautiful regardless.

Re: Nice Day for a White Wedding (2/2)

[myxstorie]

asldk idek how to respond to this comment, just that I LOVE it, thank you ;_;