UraIshi AU Ch.9

Jul 02, 2006 22:00

Title: Unravelling Threads of Fate
Rating: PG-13 for now.
Pairings: UraIshi
Summary: AU. Ishida has had a hard life. With the help of some friends, it finally looks like things are going to work out. When he meets a bizarre and cheerful man named Urahara Kisuke, the two are inexplicably drawn to each other. But when Ishida discovers the truth ( Read more... )

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zandrellia July 3 2006, 06:03:34 UTC
Sooo nice! Very well done Hato-hime! *applauds and gives a kiss as a reward for a beautiful work!*

I love Urahara more and more with each chapter. (although admittingly I'm startled often at how uhmm... nevermind.) And Ishida is perfect.

But my favorite... my absolute favorite part... was "Eat your dinner." *smirks* That was pure brilliance. Even though it was so simple and small it spoke of the gentle control the little girl holds over her eccentric father. Wonderful. I laughed so much...

And then that Urahara was so sneaky! *sighs* Again... startled but not so surprised... just finding it strange. Ah well... not important... just so good! I eagerly await more! :D

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myuki_chan July 3 2006, 06:07:08 UTC
Hee! XD

...? Whaaat? :D

Yuzu seems to be the only one who can tolerate Isshin. XD

You can never trust Urahara. lol

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zandrellia July 3 2006, 06:11:23 UTC
*nods* Well... I really, really loved this part. It was very lovely. ...I should probably stop, huh? I could keep praising you allll week over this chapter. It was beautiful. I wish I could write so well. *smirks* Is it wrong that I feel slightly proud? LOL *snuggles* You seem happy, too! This is good!

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myuki_chan July 3 2006, 06:17:07 UTC
LOL Aww thank you XD *huggles*

I'm happy because I finally got the chapter done. LOL It was sitting for a few weeks right before Ishida goes to dinner with Urahara and he gets asked to move in with him. It just wouldn't GO. XDXD

And now, only one chapter until angst. lol

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Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! bloody_american July 3 2006, 06:19:55 UTC
OMG I AM IN LOVE WITH URAHARA AND ISHIDA AND ISSHIN, OMFG WOAH.

And omg, they're moving in together! That was a good lead in to the moving in together. Ishida didn't think about the sleeping in the same bed part through, did he? XD

You should know that was hot. It was the anticipation and even though there was no follow through, it was still hot. And aww, for Urahara being so awesomly understanding.

Seriously though. I think I love Isshin a little more than the average Joe. He's just ridiculously awesome and you get major brownie points for having him in there. <333

I love this story. I missed it! ZOMG write more! ;)

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Re: Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! myuki_chan July 3 2006, 06:25:09 UTC
ROFL XD

No, he didn't. Silly boy. XD But now he knows. lol

I'm glad you thought it was hot. That's what I wanted! XD

Hee~ I had to write Isshin sooner or later. He's too amusing not to write. LOL I was seriously waiting for a chance to write interaction between him and Urahra because it would be so ridiculous.

I will do my best to get Ch.10 out sooner XD

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Re: Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! bloody_american July 3 2006, 06:33:12 UTC
OMG! It's so true, I am. Heh.

Aww, ickle Ishida is so cute! Has this Ishida ever been with a man before? Or even a woman? The poor boy seems a little more clueless than most (which I find absolutely endearing) which is why I ask.

:D I find it hilarious that Isshin and Kisuke both went to the same college. You'd think that would have been really weird but it wasn't.

I want to do the polite thing and say 'take your time' and tell you to work at your own pace but... I can't. LOL Just, um, whatever you do don't take too long okay? It's your fault! You had to go and write such a good story. XD

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Re: Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!! myuki_chan July 3 2006, 06:46:50 UTC
As far as I know, nope. lol He hasn't really had a chance to many many relationships, even of the friend sort. Poor little Ishida knows nothing. XD Which if fine, because Urahara is willing to teach. LOL

They would be the most hilarious roommates. lol

LOL! Well, I'll try not to take as long as this one did. ...cause this one took too long. XD

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our_innocence July 3 2006, 06:37:24 UTC
...Holy Lord, I seriously almost spilled my soda all over my computer (AGAIN!) when Isshin came into the scene. Funniest. Thing. EVER. I can totally see Isshin going batshit when he realises everyone's going to leave him. Congrats on another chapter well done, and I look forward to seeing the rest!

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myuki_chan July 3 2006, 06:41:18 UTC
ROFL I think that is an accomplishment! XD Isshin is funny all by himself. lol And thank you!

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our_innocence July 3 2006, 07:10:50 UTC
You should post a warning with this fic.

CAUTION: May cause severe computer damange dut to spilling soda on keyboard from laughing. >.>

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myuki_chan July 4 2006, 02:08:57 UTC
LOL! Well, I'm not sure I'm going to need that warning in a few chapters... XD

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taintedkibou July 3 2006, 11:21:27 UTC
You know! *wags a finger* You should try to catch me before I decide my pillow is my best friend ~.^

Waii~! It's like the angst from the previous chapter never existed! XDD And the fluffy fluffy fluffy rabu rabu-ness makes me happi! I totally thought Kisuke was drunk out of his gourd~ XDD

And I don't mind the lack of smut--I totally make up for that when I write my ficlets! >3 Which I need to get started on... soon... *still picturing Uryuu and Urahara all chocolate-smothered* I'm wondering if I should attach it to your AU or the Bleach universe. Hmmm~ The AU, that way Jinta and Ururu won't disturb them while their doing the norty at the shop~ X3

*twirls and sits AWAKE, waiting for Myu-chan and chapter 10*

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myuki_chan July 4 2006, 06:13:45 UTC
It's my brain's fault for deciding to start working so late in the evening. XD

The angst is going to come back soon though! lol

Well, there will be smut soon. I have no idea how I'm supposed to write real smut considering I was giggling so much while writing that last little bit. LOL XDXD

Not for a few days though! XD

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myuki_chan July 4 2006, 18:43:52 UTC
LOL XD

Plot will be soon. Namely, at the same time as the angst. lol Which won't be until the chapter after the next. XD

And even if he is serious, it doesn't last very long. XD

I think Isshin knows and just drinks anyways. LOL

They are quite old. XD; Urahara's around 20 years older than Ishida... they don't seem to care though. lol Urahara managed to finish college early, but not extremely. More on that in a later chapter. :D

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myuki_chan July 4 2006, 21:53:49 UTC
...I guess you could call it fluff. LOL

Eee doodles! :D Can I see?

Nope, Isshin didn't really stay in contact with Urahara after college, what with getting married and having kids and all.

Exactly! XD

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