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Jan 06, 2008 11:57

Title: Laundry Day
Author: Carmexgirl
Rating: NC-17 for filthy, dirty laundry. Oh and sex
Summary: Matt's let the laundry pile up. Again. PWP for tiptoe39's Domestic! porn challenge.

Mohinder opened the door to the laundry room. Or at least tried to. There was something large, stubborn and uncannily Matt-like holding the other side of the door, ( Read more... )

fanfic: matt-mohinder

Comments 9

tiptoe39 January 6 2008, 15:13:02 UTC

Ooo, static cling.
This was ho-t-t-t-t-t-t-t.

Edited to say: I'm doubly weak for guys really being vocal and shouting during sex... so thanks for giving us all the shouts of ecstacy. Yum.

Thank you for taking up the challenge. :wants to be either or both of them.:

carmexgirl January 7 2008, 17:46:21 UTC

Yes - sometimes you want to know how much fun they're having!

shara50 January 6 2008, 17:11:37 UTC

Wow, very hot!!

carmexgirl January 7 2008, 17:45:35 UTC

Thanks!

boudecia7 January 6 2008, 21:29:22 UTC

that was REALLY hot and somehow funny as well. Matt trying to hide the piles of laundry from Mohinder had me in fits of giggles. And I loved Mohinder making him beg; that was awesome. I just love this so much.

carmexgirl January 7 2008, 17:50:06 UTC

Hey thanks! - I really liked the way that played out,the fact that he knew he was in trouble but still tried in a really goofy way to hide it.

rogueslayer452 January 7 2008, 05:26:19 UTC

Wow. Awesomely done with the laundry!sex.

“Oh there will be soiling. And screaming, and moaning, and begging for more.”

Hot damn. Just, hot damn. If Mohinder was saying that to mean, all devious!voice in that hot accent of his, I would melt right then and there. I liked that you wrote Mohinder making Matt beg, which was probably the best part since I love Mohinder being all devious. Just the image of them tossling around in a pile of laundry is hilariously great. So hot and adorable and, yeah. Loved it. :D

carmexgirl January 7 2008, 17:54:08 UTC

I like the idea of Mohinder being a bit devious - in the show he has so much moral integrity, it's good to write him being a bit naughty once in a while!

crystal_mk January 15 2008, 05:03:05 UTC

Woo hoo that was hot! Mohinder's one kinky bastard and I love it!

I haven't done laundry in a while, do you think Mohinder will show up to "help" me?
*hopefull face*