With all the power of the sea revisited.

[mythix]

I entered my poem 'With All the Power of the Sea' in a poetry contest at Poetry.com
I just got a letter today say that the poem will be published and that it has made it to the semi-finals. I version I entered was a little differnent the the one I posted here

The wind came tonight
To carry me away and make me free
Feather light and worry free
I drifted to sleep
Dreaming the dreams
Of together, her and me
Carried away in the
Winds embrace
Bliss compeling me not to speak
I drifeted to sleep
With all the power of the sea
With all the power
Of the turrents and the rains
The winds took my heart
Forever with love and born to be free
I drifted to sleep
With all the power of the sea