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[mystiri]

i would very much like feedback on this, so please respond with whatever you are thinking...here is a song i wrote last night


I want to know what the world knows, how the earth feels, what the sky sees, how the stars deal.
I want to know how the cosmos rotate, how water evaporates.
I want to know what causes the sun to rise, why the moon can't have her own light.
I want to know why fire burns, what makes a young boy yearn.
I want to know how my mother felt, what causes guilt.
I want to know if babies dream, what makes an addictive personality, if anything is what it seems.
I want to know everything.
I want to know if love is real, how raw emotion feels, how psychics see, is there really ESP, how anything can be.
I want to know everything.
I want to know how the world began, was there just a woman and a man, does God exist, did we come from fish?
I want to know how to spin a lie, what it feels like to die.
I want to know what rebirth is, if you can live again.
I want to know how to see through rose-colored glasses.
I want to know how lightning flashes.
I want to know how to propose a toast, how and when to boast.
I want to know how a boy thinks, why lead sinks.
I want to know what a bird sees, how to climb trees, when to flee.
I want to know everything.
I want to know what the world knows, how the earth feels, what the sky sees, how the stars deal.
I want to know how the cosmos rotate, how water evaporates.
I want to know what causes the sun to rise, why the moon can't have her own light.
I want to know why fire burns, what makes a young boy yearn.
I want to know how my mother felt, what causes guilt.
I want to know if babies dream, what makes an addictive personality, if anything is what it seems.
I want to know everything.