Comments | mystery_sock: Be Near Me: Prologue

mystery_sock

Be Near Me: Prologue

Dec 10, 2006 10:55

Title: Be Near Me (0)
Pairing: None
Rating: R (language, frank discussion of sexuality)
Spoilers: Through 1-11: Fallout
Summary: Peter finds out a new method of saving the world from Mr. Bennet. Please read disclaimer.
( '...Oh, you're a slut.' )

fic, peter, bennet, be near me

Comments 9

meli_64 December 22 2006, 19:24:39 UTC

Wow, that's a new way of Peter getting powers that I haven't even thought about. It's a sexy way. I hope I'm on that list. *grrr*

Very good! Can't wait for the next to part.

rawthorne December 22 2006, 22:45:47 UTC

I've never wanted to be chased by HRG more in my life... Ahem. As for the story, the idea is certainly gripping. I wonder if this is going to be more on the angsty side, rather than fluff.

Be interested to see what comes next.

mystery_sock December 23 2006, 02:47:07 UTC

I'm going to try to balance angst and humor, actually... so far this little exchange with HRG is the funniest bit. But with Peter's slutdom sooooooo not in question, there's plenty of potential for comedy.

the_mad_fangirl December 23 2006, 01:46:09 UTC

This is a great concept. It's *so* the setup for the Heroes porn movie, too. Peter does Manhattan!

I wonder if Claire's on *that* list? He did list "heal from a gunshot" as a power Peter could get. Would HRG pimp his own daughter?
(hell, yeah.) Scarier: does he want Peter to sleep with Sylar? Who admittedly is not a bad looking guy if he shaves, but the brain-stealing thing is kind of a deal breaker.

And, on a down note, it's also a great way for Peter to get so overloaded that he detonates after (eek!) seducing Nuclear Ted. Let's get the poor boy some invulnerability first so he can still have kids, 'kay?

shimmeree December 23 2006, 02:59:17 UTC

lol...that's hilarious! I love it! I eagerly await the next chapter. :D

heidi8 January 9 2007, 13:26:23 UTC

I joked earlier this week that Heroes fanfic was the Everyone Shags Peter fandom, and in response someone pointed me to this fic and heh, it really is! What a clever concept - but I'm vaguely wigged that Mr Bennett is basically saying, "shag my daughter please, please, please."

mystery_sock January 12 2007, 03:11:34 UTC

Heee! I totally agree... it's Milo's fault that the fandom is like that. If he gets a haircut, the fics are going to totally dry up. ;) (Poor guy; I'm sure it's the most annoying haircut in the world, but WE NEEEEED IT.)

Bennet is a really bizarre guy, and I don't trust him one bit - he's totally uncool with it, but remember, he's not actually in charge of anything; he's working for someone else. It's like a long supply chain of "uncomfortable, but necessary"... and fortunately the Peter in this fic is cheerfully up to the task. :)