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Fic: Ritual (47): Physical Therapy

Oct 03, 2008 10:30

Title: Ritual (47): Physical Therapy
Pairing: Nathan/Peter; implied Nathan/OC
Rating: R
Spoilers: none
Warnings: see pairing; underage character
Word Count: 2600
Summary: Nathan struggles to not think of Peter in "that way", but it's a losing battle. Another "early days, teenage Peter" story - I seem to be writing a lot of these recently! ^_ ( Read more... )

oc, nathan, petrellicest, fic, peter, ritual

Comments 43

xanatosdecrion October 3 2008, 18:49:26 UTC

mystery, THANK YOU SO MUCH. I can't read it now; but am printing it off for the weekend. This makes me so happy! LOL Have a great weekend ;)

mystery_sock October 3 2008, 19:02:42 UTC

I hope you enjoy it - it's just a vignette...

xanatosdecrion October 6 2008, 15:25:22 UTC

I enjoyed, per usual chica ;) Nathan losing control? Oh that Peter is just a sexpot! He has people blowing their wad, as it were, just from touching him! Ohhh that's power. LOL. I loved the internal with Nathan, the bit on pain and how he deals with it in relation to his past 'pains' with Dixon:

Nathan frowned at the whispered voice in his memory. It wasn't a good memory; that was all very traumatic. He wanted it never to have happened. But the thought had taken root like a dandelion, and the more he tried not to think about it, the deeper it went, and trying to dig to remove it all seemed nearly impossible. He busied himself rinsing his spoon, drying it meticulously, and putting it away, and headed upstairs, wanting a shower to wash off the dried sweat of his exertions. The pain. Or the release? He hadn't started sweating until he stopped. Until he was finished ( ... )

fabrisse October 3 2008, 19:48:01 UTC

Nathan is so cooked.

mystery_sock October 3 2008, 22:52:12 UTC

Yeah, he's incredibly, unbelievably done for. He doesn't stand a chance. :D

debaser28 October 3 2008, 20:03:39 UTC

Nice hot vignette! Are you going to write about their Saturday swimming? I hope so.

Thanks for posting this.:)

mystery_sock October 3 2008, 22:53:16 UTC

I probably could write about that - anything involving a half-naked, dripping wet pair of Petrellis, I can usually imagine. :)

You're welcome! It was necessary!

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mystery_sock October 3 2008, 22:55:59 UTC

Sometimes, yes.. but the actual getting it on is SO AWESOME.

I love to write the banter, though, and the frustration, and the random web of associations that Nathan brings to the table... Peter doesn't really start out kinky, but having to deal with how twisted Nathan is helped him develop in that direction. Peter's just very sex- and sensuality-positive; Nathan is completly messed up. And Peter helps him a lot (and his high pain tolerance, and Nathan's emotional connection to pain, goes a long way toward shaping them both).

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mystery_sock October 4 2008, 05:44:22 UTC

I felt like I was being massaged, by your words! And it feels sooo good.
Yeah, I need a massage - can you tell? Hee... I'm glad you liked it. It was just a nice quickie to tide me over, since I haven't got time to get into a real, heavy, complex story. And I have so many that I want to do...

I'm sending good virtual vibes to your bank account too. Is it working?
Oh, all too well, to the tune of a couple of hundred dollars, thanks to the sick kitty. I still don't know what the problem is; I'll get a call about the blood work tomorrow. She seems better; grumpy and resentful because I won't let her go outside. :)

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mystery_sock October 4 2008, 18:49:35 UTC

That is one of the major reasons why I don't have kids either. Cats are pretty cost-effective, until, apparently, they get old. Now I'm in a world of crap - though not nearly as bad as it could have been a couple of years ago, when my entire net worth was less than $100.