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mystery_sock

Hide and Seek, Show and Tell

Mar 18, 2007 21:03

Title: Hide and Seek, Show and Tell (1/1)
Pairing: Claude/Peter
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 4300 words
Spoilers: Through 1-16, "Unexpected"
Warnings: Violence, sadomasochism, language, slash
A/N: Sequel to You're One Of Them. Takes place between "The Fix" and "Distractions" - some temporal details slightly blurred. Just a little fluff this time - ( Read more... )

Comments 33

betterthanlegos March 20 2007, 00:26:44 UTC

Icon love.
This fic was delish.
And the ending was cute.
Keep up the awesome writing ;D

mystery_sock March 20 2007, 02:48:09 UTC

Thank you, and thank you, and thank you (I think so too - schmoopy!), and I plan to!

cucumber_k March 20 2007, 02:07:49 UTC

Perfect. It was sexy and serious and cute and heartbreaking, all at once. Loved the ending.

mystery_sock March 20 2007, 02:48:50 UTC

thanks... fluff... it had to happen, because poor Claude.

rubynye March 20 2007, 02:34:28 UTC

Holy moly cannoli. That is some of the best character voice evocation I've read in a fanfic in a long time. That really *is* how Claude would have sex, how our favorite Emo Sapiens would react. I felt like I was reading a tie-in comic, an NC-17 rated one, or watching a Special Episode made somehow. I'm really impressed.

*applauds you*
*makes note to read prequel as soon as I can*

mystery_sock March 20 2007, 02:43:25 UTC

Emo Sapiens - BWAH! Awesome. It's true! Peter, the prettiest trainwreck!

Thanks for the props - that's what I'm trying to do; make it seem like it's canon, just that it's the stuff they can't show on TV because it's too pervy for network broadcast, or there isn't time to show it to you. Other folks are good at other stuff so I read their fanfic, but I can pretty much only do it this way. You have just paid me an enormous compliment, and I'm grateful.

commievampire March 20 2007, 03:39:41 UTC

I like this brand of somewhat mentally ill fluff. Are they adorably disfunctional or just disfunctionally adorable? Who knows? ^__^

mystery_sock March 20 2007, 05:17:26 UTC

They're both insane.

tessykins March 20 2007, 04:03:23 UTC

Guh. Guh guh guh. Can I pay you to just stay home and write porn? Because you should be a professional porn-writer. Your Claude/Peter are so goddamned hot and every interaction with them is erotically charged. You are encouraging my bruise kink! I love your Claude characterisation. He's got so much depth of angst and anger. And sexiness.

mystery_sock March 20 2007, 05:22:55 UTC

It would be great if you could pay me just to stay home and write porn. I'd like that very much. Thank you!

tessykins March 21 2007, 01:36:17 UTC

I'm totally saving up. We could hold a benefit party or a fundraiser. A bakesale!