Title: Ritual (21): Just a Kiss
Pairing: Peter/Nathan
Rating: R
Spoilers: none really; Season 1 to be safe
Word Count: about 2700
Warnings: Incest, underage character, sexual situations, language
Summary: Peter wants a real kiss from Nathan. First installment in the "Fall Break" story arc. Feedback+ concrit = love. My backsliding is your gain!
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Good lord woman, how in the hell did you make something as simple as a kiss, one the single hottest things, I have ever read. That was just incredible...
I am so glad you decided to continue this!!
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Now you understand why I had to write it. I said I'd write if I got an idea,and this was it. I don't know where it came from - maybe all that Peter kissing we've had on the show. I genuinely don't care who it is he's kissing (And apparently neither does he - ZING!), I just like to watch him. Milo's possibly my favorite on-screen kisser of all time; not everybody can make it look good.
I like writing sex scenes with no sex in them.
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You said Patsy's, and I thought Patsy's, which is fucking delicious. But Grimaldi's... goddamn, I might be tempted to fight you that it's not the best NY slice in the five boroughs. ^_~
Nah, the best slice is east of Park Slope, place I forget the name of, just a little hole in the wall, really. But Brooklyn does have the best, hands down. Even as a Queens girl, I concede.
And when I quibble about pizza, what I'm really saying is "I love you." ^_^ And this is wonderful and touching and deep, and... yeah.
You are so getting drinks and a slice next time you're in my hood. ^_~
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Hope I can make it out to your neck sooner rather than later - writing Petrellicest has done nothing but make my NYC longings worse. Damn you, Heroes!
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More naked scenes, too. Oh, and Nathan needs some more naked scenes, too. We haven't gotten nearly enough.
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