Fic: Ritual (21): Just a Kiss

Nov 08, 2007 21:12

Title: Ritual (21): Just a Kiss
Pairing: Peter/Nathan
Rating: R
Spoilers: none really; Season 1 to be safe
Word Count: about 2700
Warnings: Incest, underage character, sexual situations, language
Summary: Peter wants a real kiss from Nathan. First installment in the "Fall Break" story arc. Feedback+ concrit = love. My backsliding is your gain!
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nathan, petrellicest, fic, peter, ritual, r

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ladywilde80 November 10 2007, 02:56:26 UTC
*HUGS YOU*

Good lord woman, how in the hell did you make something as simple as a kiss, one the single hottest things, I have ever read. That was just incredible...

I am so glad you decided to continue this!!

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mystery_sock November 10 2007, 03:29:34 UTC
how in the hell did you make something as simple as a kiss, one the single hottest things, I have ever read.
Now you understand why I had to write it. I said I'd write if I got an idea,and this was it. I don't know where it came from - maybe all that Peter kissing we've had on the show. I genuinely don't care who it is he's kissing (And apparently neither does he - ZING!), I just like to watch him. Milo's possibly my favorite on-screen kisser of all time; not everybody can make it look good.

I like writing sex scenes with no sex in them.

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mystery_sock November 10 2007, 07:41:39 UTC
Oh, that's terrific! Yay, firsties... ^_^ Glad you liked this one.

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airspaniel November 10 2007, 04:12:02 UTC
Just a meaningless kiss... it wasn't supposed to end up like this... Please tell me you know that song.

You said Patsy's, and I thought Patsy's, which is fucking delicious. But Grimaldi's... goddamn, I might be tempted to fight you that it's not the best NY slice in the five boroughs. ^_~

Nah, the best slice is east of Park Slope, place I forget the name of, just a little hole in the wall, really. But Brooklyn does have the best, hands down. Even as a Queens girl, I concede.

And when I quibble about pizza, what I'm really saying is "I love you." ^_^ And this is wonderful and touching and deep, and... yeah.

You are so getting drinks and a slice next time you're in my hood. ^_~

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mystery_sock November 10 2007, 07:44:44 UTC
Yeah, I've had both, and both completely rocked my world (and taught me a thing or two about a NY slice). Like I said, they're transcendent, but they're not necessarily the best 'za in town. I knew there had to be better - it's the law of awesome, it is.

Hope I can make it out to your neck sooner rather than later - writing Petrellicest has done nothing but make my NYC longings worse. Damn you, Heroes!

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clubinthesky November 10 2007, 04:14:52 UTC
GUHH 0__0 This was hot! Petrellis = ♥

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mystery_sock November 10 2007, 07:46:08 UTC
Thanks - and yeah - and sometimes restraint is the hottest thing, really. I wanted to write a scene where a single kiss was as hot as an entire kinky screw, so there you have it. The magic of Petrellis! *dreamy sigh

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even_dusk_fades November 10 2007, 04:15:20 UTC
You made it so... hot, but sweet and twisted at the same time. Peter should have more kissing scenes if they inspire you to write!

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mystery_sock November 10 2007, 07:47:30 UTC
Peter should have more kissing scenes if they inspire you to write!
More naked scenes, too. Oh, and Nathan needs some more naked scenes, too. We haven't gotten nearly enough.

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even_dusk_fades November 10 2007, 08:41:18 UTC
Yes! Nathan totally needs more naked scenes. Also, I hope Peter's next naked scenes are NOT with Caitlin. I hate her.

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mystery_sock November 10 2007, 20:14:02 UTC
I don't think we'll be seeing Caitlin again any time soon, for which I am extremely grateful. Mwahahahaha. I hope they fix the future and she's trapped in her horrible post-apocalyptic timeline, although that makes Peter officially the worst boyfriend in the history of ever.

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