Ritual readers' guide

Jan 01, 2015 12:00

"An open-ended Petrellicest exercise in sheer depravity..."All the Ritual stories in chronological order. Titles, links, and brief summaries (with ratings), plus a quick overview of this whole "Ritual" relationship - it's everything for the lightly confused, but still interested! Warning: Spoilers for all aired episodes and all published web comics ( Read more... )

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About the Ritual series anonymous January 7 2008, 20:58:45 UTC
Ok, let me start out by saying that I've never commented on a fic before. At least not a Nathan/Peter one, but I think this one definitely needs some comment.
I'm brazilian and therefore have some problems with English, being that it's not my birth language and I kind of learn something new everyday on your fics. What I don't know, I can easily imangine..hehehhe.
I watched season 1 of Heroes only last month and immediately fell in love with the boys. I think your characterization of them is pretty accurate, if not a little over the top, especially regarding Peter's sensitivity. But it works perfectly with your story, and all the secret relantionship, and the fact that he can't be as honest as he would like to be. Nathan is just a total control freak in the show, and you make it sip into his sex life extremelly well. The way he deals with his own feelings regarding Peter are very real too. Guilt, confusion, protectiviness, this guy must be one big bundle of emotions, and since he's the repressed one, must be very hard for him to just let go of all that and just love his brother the way he deserves.
Ok, so I know about how secret relantionships work, and I'm definitely the stuck up one so I can usually relate to Nathan. I know where he's coming from (not the incest part, mind you...ahuahuahuah) and I know we "stuck up" people need someone like Peter around. To slap us in the face sometimes and make us pour our hearts out.
Well, loved your fic. My boss didn't like it so much as I haven't been getting any work done lately...ahauhuahauh...but keep them coming.

Suzana.

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Re: About the Ritual series mystery_sock January 7 2008, 21:32:20 UTC
Thank you so much for your comment - it means a lot to me! I'm glad that Heroes is being so well received everywhere - it's a very universal story, and it definitely stimulates the imagination. I hope you'll continue to enjoy the stories, because I am going to continue writing them!

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