Comments | mystery_sock: Fic: Ritual (7)

mystery_sock

Fic: Ritual (7)

May 13, 2007 12:38

Title: Ritual (7): Christmas at the Coopers'
Pairing: Nathan/Peter
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: One minor spoiler for 1-3: "One Giant Leap"
Warnings: Strong adult themes and language, incest, explicit sex, underage character, alcohol use
Word Count: about 3800
A/N: Written by anonymous request to elaborate something referred to in Ritual (4). Peter's ( Read more... )

slash, nathan, petrellicest, fic, peter, ritual, nc-17

Comments 40

someblazingstar May 14 2007, 07:37:13 UTC

Guh. I am totally glad you wrote and posted this.

(p.s. You don't I don't mean you when I write about people writing bad Petrellicest, right? 'Cause you at least make it dark and weird and mentally fucked, it's not all "tee hee, here is my fluffy PWP about brothers fucking!")

someblazingstar May 14 2007, 07:37:27 UTC

er, "know I don't" etc.

mystery_sock May 15 2007, 03:27:23 UTC

Wow, thank you!... and no, I don't think you group me in with "bad Petrellicest writers"... hell this was supposed to be a random PWP and now look what happened. :)

insaneboingo May 14 2007, 22:40:27 UTC

Oh my, this is wonderful. I pictured Peter to be 16-17ish, in my head. Maaaybe 15 now that I look at it again. ^_^

This turned out so well, I'm so glad you wrote it, so so glad.

I think you showed how their relationship has progressed very well. I love how you write Nathan. A lot of people will see him as the stronger of the 2, but you show him having a weakness, I LOVE that about your Nathan. I like when both of them are not so stable.. but it's something more when the one who is supposed to be holding things together.. is actually falling apart.

I think you should post this in communities, I think people will really enjoy it. I also think that it isn't so controversial.. so you could probably post it in any one of the Heroes Slash or Petrellicest communities.

I absolutely love it, sweetheart.

mystery_sock May 15 2007, 03:22:45 UTC

Awww geez. *blush, kick* I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And your first guess is closer, but again I don't want to say... and no way in hell is Nathan stronger. The only person who knows that besides Nathan and Peter is their mom, who... well... has her own reasons for keeping an eye on them.

dragonydreams May 16 2007, 02:19:35 UTC

I don't remember if I've commented on this series/story before, but I've been following it religiously. I was very excited to see you went back and wrote this "missing scene". I loved Peter's curiosity and how Nathan surprised him by going along.

mystery_sock May 16 2007, 03:35:12 UTC

Aw, the computer suddenly spazzed out, and then ate my comment. It was a really good one, too.

Still, this is most of what I wanted to add anyway - besides a "thanks" -

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mystery_sock May 16 2007, 03:37:10 UTC

Heh - the reason why the computer ate my comment the first time was that I was trying to credit http://www.miloventimigliafan.com/.

That'll teach me to be nice.

dragonydreams May 16 2007, 03:52:50 UTC

That's odd that LJ didn't post the first comment. I actually still got it in my email and was an excellent response. *grin*

That photo is truly inspirational. Now I'm gonna have to read this again knowing what you were picturing when writing.

shimmeree May 16 2007, 04:21:09 UTC

Awesome awesome awesome. Slash is never my first choice in fic, but you make it so easy and wonderful to read and I find myself really looking forward to your updates! Great chapter!

mystery_sock May 16 2007, 05:00:38 UTC

Slash is never my first choice in fic

That is a very high compliment - I am glad you gave my stuff a chance in the first place. Thank you for reading!

shimmeree May 16 2007, 05:11:46 UTC

Honestly, I think you're the only author whose Slash work I actually look for. Thank *you* for making it so wonderfully screwed up! ;)

g_shadowslayer May 16 2007, 06:32:39 UTC

Oh this is lovely and hot and so beautifully wrong. :D

mystery_sock May 16 2007, 14:51:47 UTC

Thank you for reading it! I keep wondering when I am going to go "too far" and start writing stuff that NOBODY is interested in, but then again Petrellicest in general is way beyond what most people would find acceptable.

I think it's funny, personally, and very inspirational, obviously. :)

i_am_badger May 25 2007, 05:13:23 UTC

I keep wondering when I am going to go "too far" and start writing stuff that NOBODY is interested in, but then again Petrellicest in general is way beyond what most people would find acceptable.

First of all, there's almost nothing that can't be overcome with such excellent writing. Secondly, yeah, if you're totally in for seriously smutty 'cest there rarely much farther to wander ;)

This fic is brutal and beautiful and I'm almost as sad that there's only one installment yet--or, as of yet--as I was when I realized I was looking down the barrel of an entire summer of no Heroes (she says, pretending she hasn't mainlined the series in the past three weeks and let it happily eat away her higher brain functions).

If only I could have paced myself...but I just can't stop. I'm glad you have more fic :D