Freakshow On The Ninety

[myrueme]

Trisha runs a quarter through her hair before depositing it, wondering where the coin had been before she touched it, whose hair had been there, and where their hair had been. Quickly she cleanses her hands with the squirt from a bottle of bacteria slaughtering soap, which she always keeps within arm's distance. Although with this sort of limited

Comments

[estelle_getty]

Thank you, sir!

[myrueme]

Thank YOU, ma'am. Wouldn't have had a story, otherwise.

[ibattlecyborgs]

i am in love with this...you should write about me taking credit card payments overt the phone all day. much less interesting though.

[myrueme]

Haha, yeah, I did debt collecting for a while, so I could probably write something pretty accurate.

Thanks. What did you think of As I Awoke the Meadows? If you read it.

[estelle_getty]

Eric, I absolutely loved it! I read it when I was in a hurry, so I went back and re-read it now. The first, opening line really draws you in. It is such beautiful imagery! And I love the subtle humor in it. So good. I think it was Phil that said the dialogue is great.. it truly is!

[myrueme]

Thanks! I've had a tendency to use pretty self-conscious main characters in the past, so to use two confident, sarcastic ones is pretty fun for dialogue.