Tiniest Teaser Ever for TOWJWAGABI, Part 8

[myrna1_2_3]

Oh how this part is vexing me! I can't string two words together in the QAF universe right now! I open the story and instead of working on it, I play 6,395 games of Solitaire.

Here's a bit of a teaser for the next part! I'm hoping that posting it will inspire me to keep going!

Comments

[highd]

NOT ENOUGH

Dan... "If we split up, it's not going to be because I'm some fucking chicken shit coward."

he was a coward before for not telling Justin now he is just back pedaling and trying to save face.

Justin is getting his sunshine back with this "No fucking way are you going to turn this into some fucking pity party for yourself! If Al hadn't called, when were you gonna fucking tell me about all of this? When you were packing for the airport? I mean, granted I'm not the most observant guy in the universe, but even I would have noticed that, right?"

Myrna I was thinking about this story all weekend hoping crossing fingers that a new part would be up soon thanks so much.

I like this story because there is no black and white to it its all grey I don't like Dan very much but I have to admit I see his flaws a truly honest ones, does that make sense, like I think that Dan tries to do the right thing but he doesn't know how to go about it. I think he is so busy trying to keep himself I don't know in order that he can't see that he is out of order.

The thing that I hated about Dan here is that he can't fight fair. Justin doesn't need Dan to use Brian's word to hurt him and force a decision. If Dan was a strong enough man he wouldn’t need to fall on Brian’s remark. He would have just cut the shit and stopped coasting on his own. I hate that Justin is hurt twice once by Dan and all of this and another time by Brian's words.

Myrna when are you getting our boys back together???? :)

[myrna1_2_3]

there is no black and white to it--its all grey

I think it's more realistic this way, and it forces the characters to make more ... thoughtful decisions.

Myrna when are you getting our boys back together???? :)

I swear to you if I could move this story along faster, I would! :P