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weirdqafan April 13 2004, 12:59:57 UTC
This was a great(!) chapter.

"You ever put, like, a murderer's heart in a regular person, and then they turned into a murderer too?"
You write the best bitter teenagers ever! And that's so a question that anyone would want to ask, but is too afraid of coming off stupid.

You had your chance, and God knows Justin's over it, so I am not about to consider..."
Yeah, right. Just keep telling yourself that Dan. Dan is such a douche. He's just annoying. He doesn't deserve Justin.

next time you make a move on him, try not telling him he's responsible for his mother's death
Yeah...Ok, I guess Brian doesn't deserve Justin either. But Brian's always been an asshole so...Justin's probably used to it by now.

Dan couldn't help the sudden thought that the whole scene had been orchestrated by Brian Kinney.
Duh! Doesn't he get it?! Dan's just a Brian substitute until the real one can pull his head out of his ass long enough to get Justin back. He should be having complexes concerning Brian. That's who Justin's gonna wind up with (that better be who Justin winds up with!).

That was a great chapter. I kinda almost (but not quite!) felt sorry for Dan about having to face the entire family at once. I'd be very curious as to what Deb & little Sunshine discussed upstairs, as well as what Brian said to Justin in the kitchen (although I can guess).

I can't wait for more!

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myrna1_2_3 April 13 2004, 16:59:04 UTC
Thanks so much for your comments! I chuckled all the way through them!

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