TOWJWAGABI, Part 2

Mar 13, 2004 16:12

This is more experimental than I usually am. Usually, I totally know where the story is going and even though I adore comments and feedback and suggestions from readers, I've already got the story mapped out in my head, so the suggestions don't really figure in to the rest of the story ( Read more... )

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anonymous March 14 2004, 01:08:26 UTC
everything you write is so amazingly well that i am always left speechless and thinking about your story hours after i am done reading it... i can't write well and english is not my first language, but i always wanted to beg a fanfic writer, to write a story where Brian pushes Justin away, sees him again after a long period of time of 'no time no seen' and Justin is doing great with someone else.Then the "what ifs" start to haunt Brian!!
i am so glad that you are the one to write this story and i didn't even asked you too :))
I am very curious to see how and if you are gonna get B&J back together...J is not in a conventional relationship with Dan...he feels at so much ease with him, he doesn't have to walk on eggshells like when he was with Brian, the sex is great,he loves him, Dan loves him back, Justin is too much in love to give it all away...why turn his back on Dan, whatever Brian has to offer?Dan "makes him hard when he walks in the door and says, 'Hey.'", he "made him completely reverse his sacred oath to swear off men for the rest of his whole life just six weeks after hemade that vow?", he "fucks him so long and so hard, so fucking fantastically..."...
no matter how much i try, i can't imagine Justin going back to Brian who just decided one day to kick him out of his life...

still i so hurt for Brian and want them to end up together:))
please write fast!

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myrna1_2_3 March 14 2004, 17:09:50 UTC
I am very curious to see how and if you are gonna get B&J back together...

Me too! Writing stories is easier when you know what is supposed to happen next!

Thanks so much for the lovely comments! So glad you're enjoying the fic!

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