The New World - Part 4 (End)

[myra_reldon]

Myra was mindful not to let her guard down, but infiltrating the White Tigers and gaining their trust was almost a joke after her time spent in the alternate world. The twelve rebellious leaders weren’t fools, but they were certainly impatient, and that was to be their downfall. They wanted power and followers quickly, and were not particularly

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[evillurks]

((I've been looking forward to this! Just wonderful stuff! I think what I like best is her return to the Bureau. Do I detect some subtle changes in her relationship with The Shadow now that she's on social terms with the older one? ;-D ))

[myra_reldon]

((I'm glad that you liked the ending. I always have the hardest time wrapping up stories, and this end 'chapter' was written piecemeal. I was worried it would be disjointed.

He he, just maybe. ;-D ))

[evillurks]

((I like her anger, at the Shadow and the Bureau both. It's all very justified.))

[myra_reldon]

((I'm glad you agree with that. I feel bad having her defy The Shadow openly, but I thought it would help show the small changes in her relation with both Shadows. As you said, it shows, and I'm glad! Thanks!))

[evillurks]

((He certainly subverts it quickly and neatly though, which I like. The older Shadow might be perversely pleased if he knew about that little show of defiance.))