[LJ Idol] SCI, "Rewrite"

[mymisguided]

Prompt: What's Missing?
Author's Notes: Fiction. I hope you enjoy.

Comments

[medleymisty]

I LOVE this!!! It's beautiful, and interesting, and it draws me in, and it's...sigh. It's perfect. :)

[mymisguided]

Thank you for commenting! =) I find ghost stories to be very fun to write and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Best of luck to you in SCI!

[lrig_rorrim]

I really enjoyed this. It was engaging and well written, and I liked the mystery behind the whole thing - was she uncovering the ghost, or creating her? Nice work!

[mymisguided]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the story!

And yes, exactly! I like to think she's creating the ghost - there's much more of a responsibility there to get it right, to ensure that the stories she tells don't wind up making things worse for herself or for the ghost. But that's a story for another time! xD

Thanks again for taking the time to comment, it's much appreciated!

[myrna_bird]

Hmmmm. A pretty spooky tale. :)

[mymisguided]

=) I love writing ghost stories like this, they're so much fun. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for commenting!

[karmasoup]

Fabulous. All the necessary elements, and even a bit touching. Now the young girl has quite a task ahead of her, doesn't she? Welcome back!

[mymisguided]

Aw, thank you! It's good to be back!

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! And as long as she never ends a story with "rocks fall, everyone dies" I think she'll be able to handle things just fine. xD

Thanks again for commenting!

[whipchick]

What a great ghost story! I especially like: "When she sat down at her desk, she realized that all of the pencils in the drawer were missing."

Great concept :)

[mymisguided]

Thank you! Ghost stories are such fun to write, and I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks again for commenting, it's much appreciated! =)