The conclusion to my Mylar of the Lambs crossover

Oct 02, 2008 22:08

Title: Choices and Time Part 7/7
Author: Megmatthews20Characters: Mohinder, Sylar, Nathan, Maya, Mohinder’s mother, mentions of Bob ( Read more... )

character: bob, character: maya, genre: au, genre: angst, rating: r, death, character: nathan, genre: crossover, fic

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eridanie October 3 2008, 06:38:56 UTC
ahhhh! God you fdaked me out so many times here! I'm suprised I haven't had a stroke from the panic. I kept chanting to myself. Megsie wouldn't kill off Mohinder. Megsie wouldn't kill off Mohinder.

This is truly epic final chapter. I can't remember any series I've ever read ending so epicly. You are the greatness! *worships*

I just Gah! It's impossible for me to describe what I loved about it, cuz it was everything! I can talk your ear off about how much I worship you tomorrow <3

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megmatthews20 October 9 2008, 06:28:45 UTC
*late comment is late*

ILU so much!!! There was no way I could kill off Mohinder in this series!!

I'm really EPICLY glad that you liked this chapter so much! <3

cheers and so much love! <3

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violet_anchovy October 3 2008, 06:43:07 UTC
AAAAH! I was worried about how this was going to end, but they both lived! It was still Mylary (albeit one-sided)! And yay Mohinder for his suicide fake-out plan!

Good job!

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megmatthews20 October 9 2008, 06:29:56 UTC
*late comment is late*

Heee, I didn't even know you were reading it. :)

Yeah, it's always nice to have Mylar in the end...even if it is one-sided. *G*

cheers and thanks for reading!!

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violet_anchovy October 9 2008, 08:09:06 UTC
I read *everything* on mylar_fic--I'm just really, really bad at commenting. ^_^;

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innuendo_31 October 3 2008, 07:02:19 UTC
Gah, the internet ate my comment before so here I go again...

OMG that was a great ending! Very in-character, and a thriller. :D
You had me worried that Momo would actually kill himself, but I guess he's too stubborn for that.
Also, I felt really cool for catching onto Sylar's mistake with the spider thing as soon as I read it. Normally I miss things like that. :D

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megmatthews20 October 9 2008, 06:32:09 UTC
I could definitely not have killed Mohinder off in this chapter. :)

Hee! Glad you caught the mistake! It was pretty important to the plot. *G*

So glad you found it in character and thriller-like. ^_^

cheers and thanks so much for reading, my dear!! <3

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bonniesrg October 3 2008, 08:07:16 UTC
OMG I'm crying right now, that was so sad, even with both Sylar and Momo surviving. I love Momo escaping, but it still doesn't take away what Sylar did to him. Though he has changed his life cause of it.

And Sylar would escape, it's just in his nature.lol
Also to stalk Momo down and visit him unexpectedly.

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megmatthews20 October 9 2008, 06:33:42 UTC
Heee! I love that you're agreeing with Mohinder in this one (I know how much you <3 Sylar *G*)

I'm glad you were so affected by this! I must have been doing something right. :)

cheers and thanks so much for reading!! <3 <3

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bonniesrg October 9 2008, 14:11:41 UTC
Am I that obvious.lol

I know I don't show Momo enough love, he's my 2nd fav character so with any of the other characters involved I'd take Momo's side. But when it comes to Sylar I have to take his side. He doesn't get half as much leeway as Momo, when Momo can be the colder emotional of the two. He's very standoffish, where Sylar get's more involved.

Though I did take Momo's side in this one, I can't hate Sylar:D

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blossommorphine October 3 2008, 08:55:13 UTC
I don't believe it! Interwebz ate my comment. It was suppose to be first! *sobs* I'm too tired to write it all again, but basically, awesomely written, loved that Mohinder didn't just melt into his arms, Sylar, while not killing, regrets nothing, and they both are changed for it and recognize it. Awesome.

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megmatthews20 October 9 2008, 06:36:05 UTC
*late comment is late*

Thank you so much for commenting again (I HATE it when the internet deletes my comments. >.<)

In this story, I could never get behind the idea of Sylar wanting to be with Mohinder after everything...I'm glad you agree.

cheers and thanks so much for reading! And commenting twice!

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