trust in the Cato. the Cato is good...

[original_tinks]

Catoasapun turned my ICK into WIN! And those words only share one letter! Lol.

Title: For Want Of Family
Author: Tinkering
Beta: Catoasapun
Summary: Sylar is holding on to something Mohinder loves very much. He'll do anything to get it back.
Rating: NC-17!!!
Warnings: *sighs* i have to warn you because it's only right. You wouldn't want to stumble onto a

Comments

[megmatthews20]

Sylar is sadistic and evil and twisted, and I LOVE it...

He's really taking a lot from Mohinder here...and the idea of him naming their child Zane is really creepy and scary...but Sylar is creepy and scary, so it makes a lot of sense!

I also love the concept behind the ability Sylar uses...interesting abilities like that are always neat to read about...

Love seeing Top!Mo!

cheers!

[original_tinks]

Sadistic? Lol. Hmm, maybe. He sort of had to goad Mohinder to get what he wanted didn't he? [Didn't anyone realize that Sylar brought condoms!? But he got Mohinder so mad he forgot to put one ON!!?? LOL!] But selling him out in the end, yeah that was pretty spiteful wasn't it? Lol!

Evil...no. In fact in my sequel you'll see he's a real sweetheart [read 'softie'] for his son.

I'm glad you loved it! *claps*

Twisted. Yes. Dark!fic=Twisted. *nods* Like your lovely masterpiece to which I only aspire! *grovels for next part*

I understand he takes a lot from Mohinder...He IS a bit sadistic yeah? He wants to get his own form of revenge. Better than killing him? Worse? Who knows. But taunting him with the child he'll never [supposedly =D] meet...that's evil.

Zane is all love and cuddles! [I'll get back to writing now!] And YAY! for my first Top!Mohinder!

[catoasapun]

Yay! You finally posted it! (I suck for taking forever, lo siento amiga!!!)

This was a really fun fic, Sylar was like, waaaaaaaaaaay creepy. LOL I love how, while Mohinder hates Sylar and hates what he's making him do, there are still moments of personal weakness on his part where he kind of enjoys it. Twisted!

And, the end. Oh, Zane!baby! I like how you had the Zane to love thing. Very nice.

Great job!

[original_tinks]

Totes okay! you've got school and shitz lol.

Sylar was a man on a mission. And again, yes there is a REASON behind Mohinder sort of enjoying it [All that Zane-past thing]... it's supposed to be twisted! It's a dark fic! =P

Yeah I know you love Zane!child lol. Too adorable isn't he? I'm still writing now.

[perdiccas]

Thanks for writing me a birthday fic! That was really sweet of you!

Poor Mohinder, this is such an awful situation for Sylar to put him in. I like the reasoning that Sylar wanted the child to have both powers and immunity from the Shanti virus.

I'm sure it'll work out ok for Mohinder in the end. Matt's not gonna dump him because he got raped. I feel bad for the kid though!

[original_tinks]

Ahh...*looks left and right with raised eyebrow*...I should probably point out this isn't rape. It's dub con-ish. [I don't write rape(well I did once for HP but *waves hand away* never again).]

Blackmail!sex, as in Sylar holds something over his head to make him do it...but with those "vague", not obvious hints that Mohinder has a weakness for him [Or for who he thought he was once upon a time lol]. I'm not going to say Mohinder wanted to do it because he and Sylar were WAY over. But...rape. No.

I'll be sure to add on that dub-con tag for you. I'm very sorry you didn't really enjoy it.

[perdiccas]

It's not that I didn't like it, I think it was a great twist with the baby at the end. (Although I was confused as to why he offered Mohinder the condoms. Was it a Russian roulette kind of thing? If he uses them then Sylar just gets sex and if he doesn't then Sylar's having a baby? I'd be interested to hear what Sylar's reasoning behind that was. It's almost like he's setting up another reason to make Mohinder feel guilty - if Mohinder had kepy his wits about him and used the condoms there would be no baby 9 months later.) And the power absorption plus immunity thing was an unexpected take on mpreg. Kind of like Sylar is creating his minion army (of one so far but I can envision him with legions! XD). I'll be interested to see where you take it in the sequel

[eridanie]

Yep the perdy is very right *nods* unfortunately so few people are properly educated about sexual assault.
But I with the authority that I feel I have from being raised by a executive director of a sexual assault crisis center, do prounounce the extreme rightness of perdiccas! :D

[mabetini]

Sylar’s mouth spreads slowly in a leer of satisfaction. "Just had to make sure you didn’t come in the wrong orifice."

LOL!

Gawd, the thought of Sylar taking care of a kid frightens me....that thing is gonna be EVIL!!!

[original_tinks]

No the kid isn't evil...he's all love and sunshine!

[icalynn]

So, ironically, my patient last night name was Zane Gray. At first I couldn't help but giggle, cause you know Heroes link. Then I read this and couldn't help but lol! So, all night I kept thinking it was their baby. Hee.

[original_tinks]

Wow! That is a hella coincidence! If it were me I'd have been giggling like an idiot everytime I had to read their name...so you're... "Zane Grey?" *clear throat and snerk* ah yes Mr Grey ehh...hehe.

=D